Sunshine Missed

flower of morning
diamond dew kissed, musk rose red
grape skies overhead

wistful in the mist
so long yearning for peach sun
green birds sing sudden

beautifulflowermissing youmorninghaiku

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2024 2:38:00 AM

I wonder where the location of your viewing of the green bird might be. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/15/2024 3:43:00 AM

Thanks for the information, Evelyn. I haven't seen most of those birds except in pictures, however, I have seen some hummingbirds who have some iridescent green on them. I think they are the Ruby Throated ones which are beautiful. Sara K

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/14/2024 6:35:00 PM

Thank you for the pleasure of your comment, Sara. Green jays can be found in North and South America, green hummingbirds in Arizona, the Tennessee warbler in Tennessee, the violet-green swallow in Colorado, and the painted bunting in South Carolina. :) Evelyn

Michael Tor

Date: 12/12/2024 3:40:00 PM

Sunshine Missed is another beautiful created gem Evelyn. The imagery was spectacular as you chose the perfect words to convey such beauty. God bless you Dear...

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/12/2024 3:45:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words of inspiration and delight, dear Michael. Very best wishes, Evelyn :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/12/2024 9:08:00 AM

Your "Sunshine Missed" is a fun/colorful write. Great Picture... Blessings...........

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/12/2024 3:17:00 PM

Your fine compliments are most appreciated. Very best wishes, Paula.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/10/2024 2:35:00 AM

Flowers and birds adorn you with excellent haikus. Wonderful write.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/10/2024 2:21:00 PM

I appreciate your words very much. :)

Ink Empress

Date: 12/5/2024 2:29:00 PM

Your way with painting imagery is delicious and so artistic! I absolutely loved reading this! Especially “ grape skies” “ musk rose red” “ so picturesque, with bird songs and colors! Pleasure reading this today! Sending you light always

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/5/2024 10:32:00 PM

Your words inspire me. Thank you, dear Ink. :)