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Sunshine Missed

flower of morning diamond dew kissed, musk rose red grape skies overhead wistful in the mist so long yearning for peach sun green birds sing sudden
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Kendrick Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 2:38 AM
I wonder where the location of your viewing of the green bird might be. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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December 15, 2024 at 3:43 AM
Thanks for the information, Evelyn. I haven't seen most of those birds except in pictures, however, I have seen some hummingbirds who have some iridescent green on them. I think they are the Ruby Throated ones which are beautiful. Sara K
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December 14, 2024 at 6:35 PM
Thank you for the pleasure of your comment, Sara. Green jays can be found in North and South America, green hummingbirds in Arizona, the Tennessee warbler in Tennessee, the violet-green swallow in Colorado, and the painted bunting in South Carolina. :) Evelyn
Tor Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 3:40 PM
Sunshine Missed is another beautiful created gem Evelyn. The imagery was spectacular as you chose the perfect words to convey such beauty. God bless you Dear...
Buehler Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 3:45 PM
Thank you for your kind words of inspiration and delight, dear Michael. Very best wishes, Evelyn :)
Goldsmith Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 9:08 AM
Your "Sunshine Missed" is a fun/colorful write. Great Picture... Blessings...........
Buehler Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 3:17 PM
Your fine compliments are most appreciated. Very best wishes, Paula.
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December 10, 2024 at 2:35 AM
Flowers and birds adorn you with excellent haikus. Wonderful write.
Buehler Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 2:21 PM
I appreciate your words very much. :)
Empress Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Your way with painting imagery is delicious and so artistic! I absolutely loved reading this! Especially “ grape skies” “ musk rose red” “ so picturesque, with bird songs and colors! Pleasure reading this today! Sending you light always
Buehler Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 10:32 PM
Your words inspire me. Thank you, dear Ink. :)
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:14 PM
- Beautiful written, Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 10:28 PM
I appreciate the compliment, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 11:58 AM
very pretty imagery
Buehler Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 10:27 PM
Thank you, Andrea. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 8:56 AM
grape skies overhead...cool!
Buehler Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 10:27 PM
Thank you, Kim. :)
Rolland Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 10:31 PM
beautiful moment of poetry, with grace, enjoyed
Buehler Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 10:26 PM
Your words bring joy. Thank you. :)
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