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Sunshine Invasion

red heart of morning
guilty shadows fled like dreams
scattering moonbeams

Blue jay on green rose
caressed by gold creeping heat
petals and concrete

saffron veiled dancers
of every scent and color
city sun culture

pearly paths faded
plum day's grown a bit older
sunshine's grown bolder

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2025 10:50:00 AM What creative/fun Haiku writes you have here. Love Them... Pretty Bright Sun Picture... Have a fun day writing away.......... Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/3/2025 10:04:00 PM Your remarks are very much appreciated, Paula. Have a great week. :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/3/2025 9:48:00 AM Creative work that you have penned in this one, Evelyn. It is amazing how you show the progression of the sun in the morning to the end of the day. Sara K Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/3/2025 10:06:00 PM Thank you for your kind words of esteem, Sara. Have a wonderful week. :)

Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/2/2025 11:21:00 AM That's a brilliant creative write. I truly enjoyed reading it. Best wishes .! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/2/2025 5:04:00 PM I extend my heartfelt thanks, for your very valued remarks, Paghunda. Blessings. :)

Rowena Velasco Date: 7/29/2025 4:44:00 AM Each verse paints such vivid moments—it's like watching the day bloom and shift right in front of me. I especially loved the image of the blue jay on the green rose—nature meeting city life so gracefully. Beautiful work! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/29/2025 8:07:00 PM Your gracious comments are very much appreciated, Rowena. I extend my deepest thanks. :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/25/2025 1:17:00 PM Dear Evelyn, you are so good at colorful imagery. “blue jay on green rose” - how unique! A fave! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/25/2025 3:21:00 PM Deepest thanks for your warm words and your fave, dear Kim. :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/25/2025 5:26:00 AM I've never seen a green rose. Very inspiring. Great haikus too. Hugs. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/25/2025 9:58:00 AM Yes there are also roses so deep purple, that they appear black. Thanks for the lovely comment. :)

Yann Rolland Date: 7/22/2025 8:00:00 PM brilliant haikus, both inspiring, thanks poet evelyn Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/22/2025 9:10:00 PM I appreciate your lovely thoughts so much, Yann. :)