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Strawberry Haiku

strawberry seduction –

despite the resolutions 

we share the first bite


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Thama Logan

Date: 2/13/2024 2:06:00 PM

Hi Paul, Thanks for your comment on my Haiku. I'm loving this poem you've written, strawberries are my favorite fruit! Blessings, Thama

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2024 5:35:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commeting, Thama. It was a pleasure to stumble on your poetry :) Regards & Blessings // paul

Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/7/2024 9:17:00 PM

Nothing like temptation to begin the New Year. Strawberry cheesecake does it for me. Another fine write Paul. Scrumptious in fact. Be well. Brian

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2024 5:51:00 AM

Thank you for reading and liking, Brian. In spite of the many good resolutions we make tempttaion is hard to resist!! ~ Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2023 2:04:00 PM

Whoa!! A lucious delight you have shared with us. Thanks for putting it together for us. Your visit to my page with congratulations is uplifting. Sara K

Paul Callus
Date: 11/27/2023 8:15:00 AM

Thank you, Sara; so pleased that you liked. Wishing you all the best for the week ahead! // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2023 12:52:00 PM

oh, how did I ever miss THIS one. It's such a great ku, Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 11/3/2023 2:59:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Missing one poem is not a sin!! ... and you have definitely made up for it with your complimentary words! Warm regards // paul

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/6/2023 7:17:00 PM

I will join you, Paul. I really appreciate the Haiku and magnificent, succulent image, Awesome Pangie

Paul Callus
Date: 10/7/2023 4:47:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comments, dear Pangie. Hope you have a pleasant weekend. Regards // paul

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/24/2023 10:44:00 AM

I love this Paul ! Especially the last line ! Oh to have a partner in crime is such a gift and a pleasure ! Yummy ! Big hugs my friend . Love, Susan :)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/7/2023 4:58:00 AM

You make an excellent connoisseur of fine metaphorical food, dear Susan. Thank you for giving my offering an added flavour! ~ Warm regards & Hugs my friend // paul

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/14/2023 5:47:00 PM

Ahhh… Paul my friend, this is just deliciously sexy!!! ;)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/7/2023 3:45:00 AM

Thank you, Akkina ~ welcome to my 'Delicatessen' :) Enjoy the weekend, my friend // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/11/2023 9:20:00 PM

oh a sweet and sensual delight! Dear Paul, a passionate little gem from your golden pen, and like a fascinating gem, this poem is charmingly multi-faceted. Warmest wishes and hugs my friend.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 10/7/2023 4:44:00 AM

Hi Susan! Once again I ask for forgiveness for being late in replying to your delicious comments which I always imbibe with eager delight. Thank you for being such a supportive friend. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/11/2023 3:47:00 AM

Alas they are grown in greenhouses these days. Better those in Spring.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/6/2023 12:58:00 PM

True, Victor; they are eye-catchers, but their taste is not up to standard. Thank you for stopping by; hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/10/2023 3:43:00 PM

Thanks for considering my suggestion Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/6/2023 12:56:00 PM

I am always open to ideas and suggestions, Richard. Thank you and regards // paul

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/9/2023 2:14:00 PM

Paul, your haiku is absolutely stunning. The way you effortlessly weave together beautiful alliterations creates such a vivid and vibrant image. Your passionate and heartfelt words truly make this piece a rare and precious gem. You have truly outdone yourself, my friend.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/6/2023 12:29:00 PM

Yummy...Every Monday resolution ends by Tuesday when it comes to strawberrilicious.Love it.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/6/2023 12:45:00 PM

Temptations are not always easy to resist, but then we can become victims of that same greed! Thank you for your pleasant visit, Charm. ~ Regards // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2023 3:59:00 AM

awww, this is a real gem, my friend

Paul Callus
Date: 9/10/2023 10:07:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. All the best, my friend // paul

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/1/2023 11:32:00 AM

Your strawberry haiku is a Delight, Tom Panagiota xx

Paul Callus
Date: 10/6/2023 12:47:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Pangie. Excuse the late reply; life has been atop of me!! Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/31/2023 5:41:00 AM

I wonder if “despite our reservations” might fit better with your narrative? Either way I like this snippet in time.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/10/2023 10:09:00 AM

Thank you, Richard; I always listen to what others have to say; your suggestion makes sense. Regards // paul

Bill Baker

Date: 8/28/2023 4:48:00 PM

Yes can't say no to chocolate and strawberries, Paul. Delicious looking Haiku, my friend. Yummy! Bill

Paul Callus
Date: 9/10/2023 10:10:00 AM

Glad you enjoy the haiku and accompanying visual, Bill :) Thank you & Regards // paul

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/26/2023 2:14:00 PM

very cool, paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 9/10/2023 3:14:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene. Goodnight // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/26/2023 12:14:00 PM

Excellent!

Paul Callus
Date: 9/10/2023 2:59:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Regards // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/26/2023 11:28:00 AM

Made me hungry my friend. That sure looks good enough to chomp down on. A great haiku that also looks so tasty. My first wife would diet and then sneak around eating such as that. God bless you.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/10/2023 2:58:00 PM

Glad I managed to tickle your taste buds, my friend :) Thank you for stopping by. Regards & blessings // paul