Spring


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Sweet stormless spring time - 
                       fresh breeze blowing freshness - 
                                           mating time has come.

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springmonoku

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/28/2025 5:05:00 PM

the words of your poem were as warm as the spring breezes here in Texas. Great job with the alliteration...have a blessed evening, Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 5/22/2025 4:38:00 PM

so beautiful and uplifting Victor, I love the imagery and use of alliteration too:-) hugs Jan xx

Ink Empress

Date: 5/17/2025 4:58:00 AM

How soul warming and beautiful is your monoku! I love the picture youv used and also the alliterations and wordplay and the spring nature of your monoku here is so very gorgeous? Do you get seasons in malta? We dont . But its always nice to write and read about! Sending you light always! Best wishes

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 5/22/2025 10:50:00 PM

Yes we have normal seasons.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/16/2025 1:14:00 AM

Very nice Victor, spring is a lovey time of year, when the beautiful flowers start to appear… Beryl

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/15/2025 4:57:00 PM

Honey, I'm only counting 16 syllables, is that okay? I really like this, my mind immediately went into the gutter, wondering where the line for mating time might be! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 5/15/2025 9:38:00 PM

This was not written for a contest. Just a scribble.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2025 9:00:00 AM

Spring is a glorious time of the year. All of nature seems to be in love. Thanks for sharing this one. Sara K

Maria Williams

Date: 5/15/2025 3:33:00 AM

Dear Victor,this is beautifully refreshing! Your words capture the essence of spring with such simplicity and grace—it's like a gentle breath of new life. Lovely and serene!...Love and Hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 5/15/2025 1:05:00 AM

What a refreshing and enticing piece this is, portraying the splendor and grandeur of springtime in such a beautiful way! Love the lusciously layered words with alliteration here! Sending best wishes and light, dear Victor ~