Songs of Dawn

Dawn spreads her wings upon valleys and hills
humming to the tranquil brook
songs of misty morrow

scarlet, crimson, pink flowers sway along
like dancing ballerinas
to a beautiful day



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Date: 9/1/2025 3:19:00 PM
Hello Dr. Vandana, i like the last verse. i like the line dancing ballerinas. i can see her dancing. in my imagination. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/14/2025 10:33:00 AM
Hello Dr, Van dana, I like your poem. the last verse the part where you put the dancing ballerina. I love ballet. sothe last verse meant something to me. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 9/14/2025 6:48:00 AM
:)
Date: 7/29/2025 8:55:00 AM
Love the imagery of the morning sky as wings. Well done.
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/29/2025 8:58:00 AM
Thank you!!
Date: 7/19/2025 6:21:00 AM
Enjoy beautiful dawn. Where do you stay ?
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/19/2025 6:51:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 7/16/2025 12:43:00 PM
very beautiful!
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/16/2025 9:59:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/11/2025 10:07:00 AM
Hello Dr. Vandana, Listening to the birds sing in the early morning is a delightful way to wake up. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/12/2025 10:22:00 AM
Hello Dr. Vandana, i do agree. Enjoy your day my friend. /Daarlene/
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/11/2025 8:03:00 PM
Nature's song is the best way to start the day.
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