For "Stones" poetry contest
RUBY TUESDAY and SUSIE Q are like WILD HORSES But I've got those two HONKY TONK WOMEN UNDER MY THUMB ANGIE, the girl with FAR AWAY EYES has a HEART OF STONE But PAINT IT BLACK, MOTHER'S LITTLE HELPER isn't no angel SHE'S SO COLD that when I play with her, I PLAY WITH FIRE She's a TUMBLIN DICE that left me flat and SHATTERED Just because I told her- "YOU CAN'T ALWAYS GET WANT YOU WANT" It might be JUST MY IMAGINATION, but SOME GIRLS, like her... are BEASTS OF BURDEN and OUT OF CONTROL. Those ROLLING STONES are just so SAD, SAD, SAD
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