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SAYONARA SUMMER

SAYONARA SUMMER
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sayonara, sweet summer,
melodies of warmth fade,
lilting light lingers,
while wistful winds whisper.

mellow moments melt,
hues of hope hover,
leaving summertime laughter lost
in the hush of harvest.

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Sara Kendrick Date: 9/13/2025 3:16:00 AM I am glad to see summer disappear with the heat and humidity but this drought we are having now in our area is not exactly perfect either. We do need a little rain along with the nice dryer cooler air. Thanks for sharing this one with us. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/12/2025 8:56:00 PM Very beautiful. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 9/12/2025 6:30:00 PM Love it ~ beautiful alliteration ~ Login to Reply

Jerrold Prothero Date: 9/12/2025 4:07:00 PM Very evocative and well-composed. Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 9/12/2025 5:29:00 PM thanks for dropping by, Jerrold, and for your positive comments. Wishing you a pleasant evening

Paige Hind Date: 9/12/2025 3:55:00 PM This is gorgeous, Sara. :) Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 9/12/2025 5:29:00 PM awww, thank you sweet Paige!