Reminders of You

Birdsong in the morning, droplets of dew
Jog memories of a loved one, missed so
Spectacular sky of heavenly blue
Birdsong in the morning, droplets of dew
Days lovely as this remind me of you 
All things splendorous out on worldwide show
Birdsong in the morning, droplets of dew 
Babbling brooks and whispering winds that blow.

Birdsong in the morning, droplets of dew
Spectacular sky of heavenly blue
Days lovely as this remind me of you 
All things splendorous out on worldwide show
Jog memories of a loved one, missed so
Spectacular sky of heavenly blue.

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/31/2024 11:20:00 PM

Love this Beryl it was a heartfelt piece relating a loss of a loved one. High marks my friend a winner in my eyes. This was a magnificent write that in my humble opinion should have gotten a high placement in the contest. Blessings your way...

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/1/2024 1:17:00 AM

Thank you Michael, it’s always disappointing to see N/A after one’s name, still it’s a chance one takes when entering a contest, I guess most losers feel the same, poets feel proud of their poetry, but it’s all in the name of the game… Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/30/2024 1:11:00 AM

What a clever comment by Robert below and what a tremendous write. I hope you are keeping well my friend thank-you for all your lovely comments you send me. You are special . Hugs galore dear Beryl. Blessings, Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/30/2024 1:58:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer, apart from having my husband ill at the moment I’m as well as I could be in the circumstances. Writing does help and so does the lovely responses from the beautiful people on PoetrySoup. Blessings returned, Beryl

Robert Gorelick

Date: 10/29/2024 6:36:00 PM

Wonderful--It seems so bitter-sweat how the more glorious our surrounding the more we rue the absence of a loved one. It's a bit like missing the passing of one's mother each time a lovely song come to mind. Touching. You have employed Milton's Trionet form with a unique and eloquent phrasing. Robert soupmail

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/29/2024 7:47:00 PM

Thank you Robert, sad to say my poem received an N/A, but I love it anyway. Thanks for the soupmail, have responded… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/29/2024 2:40:00 AM

This is an exquisite poem with great rhymes and perfect construction for this form. Best wishes worthy of high placement.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/29/2024 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Victor, whatever the result of the contest, you have made my day…. Beryl

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/28/2024 10:35:00 AM

Dear Beryl, What beautiful words and repeated lines make this Triolet worthy of praise, and the message is uplifting. Good Luck! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/28/2024 12:05:00 PM

Thank you dear Daniel, I enjoyed the challenge of the contest, win or lose with this poem I’m well pleased. Autumn Blessings to you in return, dear friend… Beryl