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Mystic Rose Rose's Contest: Each Star Has A Pattern Of Its Own...3 Apr 25

Rare Is A Star's Luster

Into a luscious and darkened wood
heading home,I gaze above a lea,
Suddenly I'm not where I should be
as clouds enthrall , my senses allured!

A thousand stars blazing everywhere,
over a mantle of softest pink.
Yet each of them differs... in its blink;
Flaunting its own luster in the air.

One twinkle reflects of dreams quite free;
another flicks umbra, sad 'though wise
And beyond northeast, to my surprise,
this youngest flame, speaks of love's decree!

Twin stars blush in rare hues ...mauve to gold,
quivering on skyline's hallowed grail,
Through prayers deep, I thank nature's trail
where Light leads me to wonders, untold!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 4/10/2025 2:30:00 PM
Beautiful, well, well done!!
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Date: 4/10/2025 10:57:00 AM
Nette, the starts you describe seem amazing. With a little imagination, we can go anywhere you think of taking us. Smiles!
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Date: 4/4/2025 7:15:00 PM
I agree with poet Maria Williams, your write is enchanting! Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 4/3/2025 5:43:00 AM
Dear Nette,This is so dreamy and enchanting! The way you capture the night sky’s magic makes it feel like stepping into a celestial fairytale. I love how each star holds its own story—some wistful, some full of love. Just pure wonder and beauty!...Hugs
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Date: 4/3/2025 12:54:00 AM
Dear Nette, This is such a soft and calm take on the prompt! I love the seamless flow of your word weaving and how you’ve especially written “ Twin stars blush in rare hues ...mauve to gold, quivering on skyline's hallowed grail,” how stunning and ethereal! A cosmically pleasing poem written from your ink! Pleasure reading this gem! Sending you light always
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