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Progess

I
cannot
imagine
future living
without eyes tearing
while screams chest develop -
no acceptance views sooth me -
wanting release for inner peace
seems a futile painful endeavor
I hear heaven's precious angels crying -
relationships   worship   purpose tainted
truth will be lost as dysfunctions grow -
artificial intelligence
violates all hearts   minds   souls -
it is not progressive
but sick aggressive
to rape visions
choke mankind
undo
us

angerbetrayalchildrenevilgodetheree

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/19/2025 11:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Progess" write. Happy Easter... Have a blessed day with your win.......

thriveni c mysore

Date: 4/18/2025 4:30:00 AM

true lines. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/14/2025 1:34:00 AM

Writing AI poems or other things will lead you nowhere. Loved your poem.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/13/2025 4:51:00 PM

CayCay, the future you describe seems possible. To me the danger we face from AI comes when it's given the ability to make decisions and make things happen rather than simply make recommendations. Unfortunately, the military will be using it and who knows what will happen as it's given more and more power. It's like everything else that has the potential to help or to destroy depending on how it is used. Example, curing cancer or engineering biological warfare. It's vital we have good leaders.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/13/2025 10:09:00 AM

You echo some of my fears. I concur. There will also be issues leading to emotional dysfunction, a lack of human need to do, seek, achieve, create, etc., the human element of life is dramatically changing, and I rebel with everything I am. In the 80's artificial intelligence meant a blonde, I'd like to go back to that. CayCay