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Never Will I Unsee

I simply did not understand 

It was completely out of my hand 

Looking in from the outside 

Eyes and mouth open wide 

Never will l unsee

Etched in my mind eternally

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/2/2024 6:52:00 PM

So many unexpected intrusion to our brains. Thank you for not describing it. It may be difficult to unread.

Deb M
Date: 11/5/2024 11:36:00 AM

Thats funny Hilda! Thankyou …Debx

Terry Flood

Date: 10/30/2024 6:04:00 PM

Honestly, Deb… I wore that Tutu for a bet… and the fishnet stockings just seemed to work. Seriously, a write that I’m sure we can all relate to to some extent, Deb. Terry

Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:46:00 PM

Dont expect me not to share this with others either Terry everyone needs to know the real you!! Haha Debx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/30/2024 8:38:00 AM

We cannot explain some things in life but they or it is for a very important reason so don't try to understand, just accept and have faith. Blessings my lovely Deb. Jen

Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:49:00 PM

Thankyou and blessings to you also Jen! Always lovely to see you! Debx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/29/2024 2:46:00 PM

well said, deb! made me curious about what you can't unsee, but i suppose it could be something positive or negative. i'd bet on the negative, though...

Deb M
Date: 11/1/2024 1:47:00 PM

Actually Ilene its fiction so l didn’t see anything haha….sorry to be sooo boring Ha! Thanks…Debx