-Never Will I Unsee

I simply did not understand 

It was completely out of my hand 

Looking in from the outside 

Eyes and mouth open wide 

Never will l unsee

Etched in my mind eternally
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 6:52 PM
So many unexpected intrusion to our brains. Thank you for not describing it. It may be difficult to unread.
M  Avatar
November 5, 2024 at 11:36 AM
Thats funny Hilda! Thankyou …Debx
Flood Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 6:04 PM
Honestly, Deb… I wore that Tutu for a bet… and the fishnet stockings just seemed to work. Seriously, a write that I’m sure we can all relate to to some extent, Deb. Terry
M  Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 1:46 PM
Dont expect me not to share this with others either Terry everyone needs to know the real you!! Haha Debx
Proxenos Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 8:38 AM
We cannot explain some things in life but they or it is for a very important reason so don't try to understand, just accept and have faith. Blessings my lovely Deb. Jen
M  Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 1:49 PM
Thankyou and blessings to you also Jen! Always lovely to see you! Debx
Bauer Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 2:46 PM
well said, deb! made me curious about what you can't unsee, but i suppose it could be something positive or negative. i'd bet on the negative, though...
M  Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 1:47 PM
Actually Ilene its fiction so l didn’t see anything haha….sorry to be sooo boring Ha! Thanks…Debx
Cunningham Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 1:07 PM
I think we've all been guilty of looking away and not seeing what's before us. But as we get older we get wiser. Tom
M  Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 1:16 PM
That is my very true my very wise trustworthy friend!! Hope you are well Tom. You on the road? Debx
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October 29, 2024 at 1:04 PM
Hi Deb, I have the same reaction when I look in the mirror now days. Xx
M  Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 1:07 PM
Haha.....me too ...l forget lm old and when l look in the mirror its like Whooa!! Ha.....Debx
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