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Mental Health

Moth wings aren’t as bright
Even when against sunlight
No one fears the butterfly 
Tears smear the maddest cry
A man is scorned for life
Let him morn let him try

Holding on to tender insides
Energy driven by his pride
Amethyst pain from his brain
Licorice lies drive him insane 
Talk to him about mental health 
How to listen how to help

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/1/2025 1:58:00 PM

Your "Mental Health" is a wonderful yet sad write. Great Ending.... Wish you would write more. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Karen Jones
Date: 9/1/2025 2:28:00 PM

Thanks Paula! Hugs!

Reya Suri

Date: 8/24/2025 12:53:00 PM

I love this. It's a vivid reminder that mental health and human actions are quite intertwined. Sending you hugs.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/24/2025 1:45:00 PM

Hugs returned Reya!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/13/2025 9:31:00 AM

Well written. Mental problems are disabling though a person may appear healthy. The brain is a fragile machine.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/24/2025 1:44:00 PM

Yes it is! Thanks for your compliment Hilda!

Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/13/2025 8:16:00 AM

The poem touches not only on personal pain but also on society’s response — how people are judged or ignored (“A man is scorned for life / Let him mourn let him try”). It invites reflection on empathy, patience, and awareness. It’s a reminder that struggles aren’t always visible, and that understanding and compassion can make a real difference. It’s more than mental health — it’s about human kindness and noticing the unseen battles people face.

Karen Jones
Date: 8/24/2025 1:44:00 PM

Your grasp of the message is touching! Thanks for getting it Rowena!