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For my sister Jan - Written 16th June 2025

Maestro Sister Jan

Please play a song for me Jan, in flashback A song that brings lovely memories back I well remember days from long ago How we adored our musical maestro. We'd stand round the piano as you played Mesmerised by the sounds your fingers made And here you are many decades gone by Tickling the ivories, and still we sigh.
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Date: 6/23/2025 11:45:00 AM
This poem and the sound of your sister's piano playing show the love and admiration you have for her, Beryl. I admire people who play any musical instrument...something which, alas, I can't boast of! Thank you for sharing your memories with us. ~ Regards // paul
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/23/2025 2:44:00 PM
Paul, I’m one of five sisters, unfortunately we lost one sister four years ago. The sister we lost had a beautiful singing voice, she used to sing solos in church. I was in the church choir too, though I love to sing I haven’t got a a good singing voice. Jan is the only one of us that can play the piano. Thank you, Beryl
Date: 6/19/2025 9:34:00 AM
Beryl, you’re reminding us all how quickly time goes by for us now. You have expressed a lot of tenderness and the duality of sadness and joy that’s ever present. Hope you have many more opportunities to smile!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/19/2025 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Duke, it’s amazing how quickly the time has gone by. I remember well how our eldest sister Jan would try and get us sisters to play the piano too. I think it’s wonderful to be able to play any musical instrument, wish I could. I hope we do have many smiles to come, and the same is desired for you too… Beryl
Date: 6/18/2025 7:03:00 AM
Hi sister Beryl, it's so nice looking back on those wonderful times from the past, it's lovely rekindling them now and again,hope you and Alan are keeping well.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/18/2025 8:40:00 AM
Hi brother John, pleased to see you back and hope you are keeping well. It was nice being with my sisters recently and recalling memories from the past. Alan is not that well, but he keeps going and that’s what matters. Thanks, Sis Beryl
Date: 6/16/2025 8:08:00 PM
A lovely tribute?
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/16/2025 11:37:00 PM
Thank you Kim, I wrote this for my sister as we were discussing our childhood days recently, it brought back the memory of sister Jan learning to play the piano… Beryl
Date: 6/16/2025 4:19:00 PM
a lovely poem and delightful read with an engaging story. Growing up we stood at mother's piano, captivated with how her fingers seemed to just glide across the ivories. Nicely done! yellow rose
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/16/2025 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Yellow Rose, I just think it’s amazing to be able to play the piano, or any musical instrument. Beryl
Date: 6/16/2025 2:02:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Maestro Sister Jan" write/story. Great memories are the best kind to have. Enjoy Them... Have a wonderful day writing away..........
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/16/2025 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Paula, Jan is the eldest of five sisters, a lovely sister, as they all are. Sadly we lost one four years ago, she’s sadly missed… Beryl
Date: 6/16/2025 7:37:00 AM
Bravo Beryl. Wish my family had some music talent in my family. Alas even I, can't rhyme a poem properly.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/16/2025 10:11:00 AM
Oh Victor, you can rhyme, I know because I’ve read many of your poems in my PoetrySoup time… Thank you, Beryl
Date: 6/16/2025 5:57:00 AM
Sweet poem for sis. Always nice to have at least one on the family musically inclined. My family got the big zip in that dept
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/16/2025 10:09:00 AM
It is nice to have a sister who plays the piano. The sister we lost had a beautiful singing voice, so did my dad. I can’t sing, but love singing, though I get on hubbies nerves. Thank you Tom
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