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Las Posadas Haiku

no space at the inn
for the man and pregnant wife -
fate had booked a cave


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Fall or Winter Haiku Contest
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16th November 2021

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/23/2021 7:05:00 AM

Your "Las Posadas Haiku" in just 3 lines tells the story. Few words with much said. Have a Blessed Christmas.........................

Paul Callus
Date: 12/29/2021 2:24:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. Christmas was enjoyed with all the blessings it brings along with it. Best regards, my friend // paul

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/28/2021 3:01:00 AM

Hope you win for youare a master of the This form. Besr.... Panagiota

Paul Callus
Date: 12/2/2021 1:41:00 AM

Thank you, Pangie. You are too generous. Take care and get better soon. ~ Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/23/2021 11:00:00 AM

Animals included in the nativity scene!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/23/2021 11:41:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, Kim. Best regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/23/2021 8:08:00 AM

Well done Paul. I hope you have a nice Thanksgiving :)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/23/2021 11:43:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi. Here we do not celebrate Thanksgiving as such, but we reserve that to Christmas and end of year celebrations. Best regards // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/22/2021 10:25:00 PM

A cave! Now that's an interesting perspective, Paul:) well done:)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/23/2021 11:49:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. Best regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 11/22/2021 5:19:00 AM

Nicely done Paul. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 11/23/2021 11:49:00 AM

Thank you, Judy. Regards & Blessings // paul

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/20/2021 9:37:00 AM

They should prefer a room of their home. Make it a bit more cozy, may he invite a dear friend. And enjoy like their is no tomorrow... Haha... Great imagery Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 11/23/2021 11:50:00 AM

Glad you found it to your liking, Paghunda :) Thank you for a pleasant visit. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2021 11:18:00 AM

Paul this is perfect for the Christmas theme, I am finally out of isolation but the tiredness is overwhelming but i have read fatigue is a well know side effect from the covid infection, hugs to all the family:-) Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 11/26/2021 6:33:00 AM

I read your comment a few days ago and it's only now that I am answering it! I distracted myself when I went aside for a sec to send a soupmail :) Thank you for stopping by. Regards to all. Hugs // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 11/18/2021 7:51:00 AM

what a beautiful and very suitable write for Winter, my friend

Paul Callus
Date: 11/23/2021 11:40:00 AM

Glad you found it to your liking, Jack. Best regards // paul