Paul Callus Poet Haiku

Las Posadas Haiku

no space at the inn
for the man and pregnant wife -
fate had booked a cave


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Fall or Winter Haiku Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
https://www.howmanysyllables.com/
16th November 2021

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Paula Goldsmith December 23, 2021 at 7:05 AM Your "Las Posadas Haiku" in just 3 lines tells the story. Few words with much said. Have a Blessed Christmas......................... Paul Callus December 29, 2021 at 2:24 PM Thank you, Paula. Christmas was enjoyed with all the blessings it brings along with it. Best regards, my friend // paul

Panagiota Romios November 28, 2021 at 3:01 AM Hope you win for youare a master of the This form. Besr.... Panagiota Paul Callus December 2, 2021 at 1:41 AM Thank you, Pangie. You are too generous. Take care and get better soon. ~ Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues November 23, 2021 at 11:00 AM Animals included in the nativity scene! Paul Callus November 23, 2021 at 11:41 AM Thank you for stopping by, Kim. Best regards // paul

Heidi Sands November 23, 2021 at 8:08 AM Well done Paul. I hope you have a nice Thanksgiving :) Paul Callus November 23, 2021 at 11:43 AM Thank you, Heidi. Here we do not celebrate Thanksgiving as such, but we reserve that to Christmas and end of year celebrations. Best regards // paul

Joanna Daniel November 22, 2021 at 10:25 PM A cave! Now that's an interesting perspective, Paul:) well done:) Paul Callus November 23, 2021 at 11:49 AM Thank you, Jo. Best regards // paul

Judy Ball November 22, 2021 at 5:19 AM Nicely done Paul. God Bless, JB Paul Callus November 23, 2021 at 11:49 AM Thank you, Judy. Regards & Blessings // paul

Paghunda Zahid November 20, 2021 at 9:37 AM They should prefer a room of their home. Make it a bit more cozy, may he invite a dear friend. And enjoy like their is no tomorrow... Haha... Great imagery Paul Paul Callus November 23, 2021 at 11:50 AM Glad you found it to your liking, Paghunda :) Thank you for a pleasant visit. Regards // paul

Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 11:18 AM Paul this is perfect for the Christmas theme, I am finally out of isolation but the tiredness is overwhelming but i have read fatigue is a well know side effect from the covid infection, hugs to all the family:-) Jan xx Paul Callus November 26, 2021 at 6:33 AM I read your comment a few days ago and it's only now that I am answering it! I distracted myself when I went aside for a sec to send a soupmail :) Thank you for stopping by. Regards to all. Hugs // paul

Jack Horne November 18, 2021 at 7:51 AM what a beautiful and very suitable write for Winter, my friend Paul Callus November 23, 2021 at 11:40 AM Glad you found it to your liking, Jack. Best regards // paul

Harry Horsman November 17, 2021 at 10:27 PM A signpost haiku love it. Yes it started there.

Eve Roper November 17, 2021 at 9:04 PM Great imagery, Paul, had to googel Las Posadas. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Darlene De Beaulieu November 17, 2021 at 12:16 PM Hello Paul, booked a cave a cave?! Interesting. Regards. Darlene Paul Callus November 26, 2021 at 8:10 AM Your cave a cave is a comment to save, Darlene :) Regards // paul

Delice Arleen Skelly November 17, 2021 at 2:38 AM Very nice indeed Paul. Stay safe Delice Paul Callus November 26, 2021 at 6:55 AM Thank you, Delice. I'm doing fine....take care my friend. // paul

Tom Cunningham November 17, 2021 at 12:16 AM You captured the nativity scene so well Paul. Good luck in the contest, hope your week is going well. Tom Paul Callus November 26, 2021 at 6:54 AM Glad you enjoyed it, Tom. I'm busy cleaning the yards and garden after the unusual floods we had yesterday. Best regards // paul