Instills

I ask myself have I come to a stand still?
Is this a Halt?, or is this only a full stop
Because if I were to get back up that hill
I think I'd need a Catapult to reach the top

Perhaps the fact I have now lost the will
Maybe a lighting Bolt though I think I'd drop
And yet again, the same old run of the mill                                          
Is it my Fault, if everything becomes a flop?

I ask myself have I come to a stand still?
Ignoring an Insult if one dose take a pop
It's that same old feeling, again having nil
I'm like an empty Vault, a worthless crop 

It's true what they say there's no magic pill
Follow a Cult I'd run skip and jump to hop
I'm told I've got nothing to lose go for the kill
But though I Revolt, because I’m in this strop
 

Again another introspection taken from ideas
older wonder with pattern again another interpretation
of ones self written by myself davidscott feb 2013
probably makes no sense
but whats going on in my head right now dont
just another way of clearing my head a bit  STILL,,,,,,,,,,,,,
STILL TRYING TP ADD EXTRA VERSE
MAYBE IN FUTURE

NOTE TO READERS
like others tweeked a little while working on something new 
wanted to look at others but not change just tweek a little 

apart of an anthology   attributes vatage  moods sorrow  cranium etc
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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