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In My Eyes


Behold the true depth
           of every moment
                 stolen by time,
     while each whisper
           caresses the beauty within

If you could only see the you
  that I see through my eyes,
        your soul would awaken
  to love again,
      just hold you captive
and never let go


                       Just remember . .


                           . . You will always be
                                          the light
                                      that shines forever,
                                                in my eyes



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  Just a little Scribble

~ If you could only see the you
                that I see, through my eyes ~

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Curie Stark

Date: 6/2/2022 10:21:00 PM

Beautiful

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/3/2022 1:19:00 PM

Thank you, Curie. I appreciate your lovely comment. :) Brandy

Running Wolves

Date: 12/17/2019 5:04:00 PM

Mmmm.... Wonderfully written

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/17/2019 7:00:00 PM

Oh my!!! Thank you Running Wolves. :) Brandy

Funom Makama

Date: 9/9/2019 10:36:00 AM

Your lines expectedly weigh in tonnes and your consistency has made you a master of masters in this act. This is beyond compliments. Good work mate. An absolute beauty.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/9/2019 12:12:00 PM

Thank you Funom for your lovely comment. So kind of you to stop by and read this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts humble me. :) Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 8/21/2019 2:48:00 PM

That light must be special, well done...TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/21/2019 9:50:00 PM

Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you Tobey!! Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/27/2019 2:55:00 AM

A message of genuinely felt words written straight from the heart - time steals so much from us, and it is up to us to make up for this lost time - you are a master of writes in the romantic arena - kudos Nicole - love your poems. Hugsm Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/27/2019 2:13:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer! You can feel each and every emotion. Thoughts from my heart are here upon the page. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/26/2019 2:40:00 AM

Oh, have I looked at certain others with these thoughts in both my heart and head as aimed at them! Your words captured better than I ever have the emotional passion that surges thru us when we feel this way - it can be intense. I really like this emotive gem! This feeling is love and I got that from your words. All the best ... CayCay

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/26/2019 3:54:00 PM

Your thoughts are always from the heart. Thank you CayCay. I know we can all relate to these words, as far as seeing someone beyond what they can see. If only they could see what we do. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/24/2019 7:26:00 AM

Such a blessing for that special one to hear: If you could only see the you that I see, through my eyes. And such an enlightenment to read: Behold the true depth of every moment stolen by time, while each whisper caresses the beauty within. Your romantic writes are always so special and much joy to read, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/24/2019 1:28:00 PM

Welcome back Vijay!! :) I hope that you have enjoyed your time away. Thank you for such a wonderful comment on this little scribble of mine. Sometimes, we can see what others cannot. You and your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy

Silent One

Date: 7/21/2019 5:50:00 AM

Miss your sensual words...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/21/2019 6:20:00 PM

I know you do. Many different moments and emotions hold me, and when they do, they gently fall upon the page. Thank you Silent One for your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2019 8:52:00 AM

That is a beautiful thought. It is sad the way that some people see themselves.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2019 2:20:00 PM

Thank you Richard. You are right, some don't see themselves as others do. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 7/18/2019 3:29:00 PM

Beautiful Brandy...you have out your special touch into another very romantic scribble. Love this...Sending hugs :) Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/18/2019 7:01:00 PM

Thank you Charlie. Romance and love are my favorite subjects to linger in. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Hugs to you. :) Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2019 7:50:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this beautiful write Brandy...Fave...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/18/2019 9:44:00 AM

You are very welcome Joseph. Thank you for your kind words and for placing this is your favorites. :) Brandy

Silent One

Date: 7/17/2019 4:28:00 PM

Eyes are the window to the soul... beautiful words as always..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/17/2019 8:58:00 PM

Exactly!! Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

John Hamilton

Date: 7/17/2019 12:12:00 PM

Another lush and romantic write...enjoyed!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/30/2019 3:28:00 PM

I don't mind. I am humbled that you used one of my titles.

John Hamilton
Date: 7/25/2019 8:36:00 AM

I used one of your titles in my 20 titles poem, hope you don't mind!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/17/2019 2:05:00 PM

Thank you John. Just speaking from the heart. So kind of you to read this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 7/17/2019 9:03:00 AM

Another beautiful scribble from your heart, B. Your poetry is a light that will always shine for many Soupers. All my best to you my sweet friend. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/17/2019 1:36:00 PM

Always.. Scribbling from the heart. Such a sweet thing to say my dear friend. I am just being me. Thank you for being here, for being you. I appreciate your support. My best to you. :) Brandy