I Live Zealously Breathless

"Being alone with Spirit lifts souls with gifts of joy for hearts and light for eyes." Poet

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Whether I am embracing joy or buried in strife, Your presence has been clear to me all of my life. Through all years, I have sought to feel You even more so truth continuously cements firmer within my core. Your closeness - my awareness ~ I live zealously breathless Whenever I need and seek precious time alone with You, I close my eyes so all of the world leaves my view. Focusing on a tiny white spot grows an ethereal light. I see and feel vibrations pulsed exquisitely bright. Your closeness - my awareness ~ I live zealously breathless Within my chest palpitates a genuine, stupendous high unlike any intoxication to be felt on earth's side of sky. It is no longer air that I breathe, but Your glory I inhale. You lovingly wrap me serene in glimpses of divine detail. Your closeness - my awareness ~ I live zealously breathless
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Date: 6/9/2025 6:42:00 PM
Beautiful! You are indeed blessed, CayCay ~ let grace carry you on its ethereal wings!
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Date: 5/29/2025 9:18:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your wonderful Rhyme write and quote again. Have a blessed day with your win.............
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Date: 5/28/2025 7:17:00 PM
Beautiful CayCay! I can identify with every word, feel everything. Excellent! Thank you for sharing! Ron
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/29/2025 12:35:00 PM
If I had been 'fishing' in my comment to you yesterday, I would have been blessed by hooking a fish of generous, fulfilling and validating portions. My muse and I are sated with gratitude from the gifts your words have given us. Another blessing is the feeling of sincerity in my 'fishes' colors. Thank you for all the above. Crossing paths seems not to have been an accident. Hugs ... CayCay
Date: 5/27/2025 4:33:00 PM
Breathtaking- wish I could be more in touch, lol- sometimes the world is sleepy and heavy and...gray :)
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Date: 5/27/2025 4:35:00 AM
- Congratulations, hooray...one of my favorites :) - hugs
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Date: 5/26/2025 8:03:00 AM
This is so beautiful. I envy you because this is an experience not familar to me. My mom was this way too. I think I was not born with a very spiritual nature and it saddens me. I believe in God and want to feel that passion that others feel. I think that is why I want a near death experience, just so I can know the beauty of God's light.
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Date: 5/25/2025 7:36:00 PM
CayCay, your beautiful poem of devotion is so touching and inspiring. It's a fave for me. :)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/26/2025 12:19:00 AM
Oh, you did, you really, really did, I checked, you said and remembered, then you did it! I am jumping up and down while typing (can you imagine?) Mentally, I am while my poetry-self inhales a breath of validation. I thank you. You really, really did! CayCay
Date: 5/25/2025 11:52:00 AM
Wonderful poem CayCay. The rhyming is excellent and flows smoothly. Good luck in the contest
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/25/2025 12:01:00 PM
Oh, hi, you came by, I was just at your place. THANK YOU for your uplifting comments, Oliver. Poetry hugs ... CayCay (did you notice I left comments on a few of your first postings?)
Date: 5/25/2025 10:37:00 AM
What a wonderful Rhyme write and quote you have here. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away.........
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/25/2025 10:44:00 AM
Paula, your comments are appreciated! I'll come check out your entry. AND, today I actually am writing away. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 5/25/2025 2:59:00 AM
I am not very good at rhyme, you are though. I like your structure in this poem. It has that feel of a great poem.. You did extremely well, better than mine. Well done and best for a win. Poetry hugs returned.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/25/2025 10:42:00 AM
I embrace your comments. You CAN do rhyme and do a lot of the time, I've seen such and enjoyed same from you. I love your visits. More poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 5/25/2025 2:15:00 AM
- "I close my eyes so all of the world leaves my view" ... to make peace with body and soul ... to shut out the evil images of the world - A meaningful poem about life, which resonates with our personal experience, CayCay - Best wishes in the contest :) - (I have a Friday humor poem for you :) - hugs
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/25/2025 10:45:00 AM
Me thinks you really, sincerely enjoyed my poem - I sense it from your words and value the feel. I'll be right over for my humor hit. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 5/24/2025 9:51:00 PM
Marvelous! A deeply felt write. Inspirational, gw
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/25/2025 12:02:00 AM
I had very little to do with composing this, it bubbled up from deep within while I was contemplating what to do for the 'Breathless' contest. Other than grabbing pen and paper and pondering words that I liked paired with breathless for the repeated line, my muse or 'other' wrote it. With 6 words you completed the joy and delight I have for the write. Love ... CayCay
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