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High Above -- Down Below

  
     high above… shines love

        celestial skies… peaceful dove… 

            down below... war’s glow

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Randy Freie

Date: 9/19/2025 3:07:00 PM

Wounded warriors weep in battlefields deep, bearing barren bones, they creep! How many more miles must they crawl before they sleep? All of eternity and more, they must reap! Suffering the flames of "Hellfire" in battlefields deep!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/17/2025 5:23:00 PM

simple and realistic words...liked them :-)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2025 7:43:00 PM

TYSM, Sara.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/17/2025 2:57:00 PM

May peace reign in the skies and so below Gershon, nice poem

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2025 7:43:00 PM

Amen, Mystic. Thanks, gw

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/17/2025 9:47:00 AM

Its an evil religion war.'

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2025 7:43:00 PM

You got that right, Joe.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2025 3:08:00 AM

I wonder what God's thoughts are about man destroying this beautiful place called earth that He created especially for mankind to have and enjoy. Sara K

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2025 7:42:00 PM

God may just have to let s blow it all up so He can try again...

High Above -- Down Below

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