Evening Begins

The evening begins the sky has darkened
A full moon is shining bright
With the bright stars glitters
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Date: 9/19/2025 6:13:00 PM
Hi Darlene, You created a perfect poetic cocktail, that is simply mesmer Thank you for this FAV. ….Complex poems, I avoid, as though another poet is trying to impress me. And doing so they lose me., I would rather enjoy something I can relate to. Like your poetry.!! “ Pangie”
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Date: 9/19/2025 6:35:00 AM
A beautiful evening you have described Darlene. Very nice. I love to see the moon and stars :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/19/2025 9:53:00 AM
Hello Heidi, every evening i go to the window to view the sky. My fav. moon is the full moon.With the bright shinny stars. I look for the bright star and make a wish. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 9/16/2025 5:53:00 PM
A perfect mood, a perfect night. Very lovely. Never alone when so many bright stars for company. I love to sit quietly, and just star gaze. Magical in a way. Have a great evening my friend!
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Date: 9/17/2025 10:45:00 AM
Hello Joe Dimino, I enjoy to gaze up at the stars. Yes it is peaceful. My fav. moon is the full moon. I see a fAce and a smile. Every time the full moon appears. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 9/15/2025 8:39:00 PM
This is simple and peaceful. The imagery of the moon and stars captures the calm beauty of evening. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Date: 9/17/2025 10:41:00 AM
Hello Krishika, so nice to meet you. your welcome. I felt peaceful when creting this poem. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 9/13/2025 10:00:00 PM
Lovely written Kimo, Darlene. Don't trust anyone at night.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/14/2025 10:57:00 AM
Hello Victor, Yes that is right, I agree with you. I won't trust anyone at night. enjoy y9uor day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 9/11/2025 8:37:00 AM
Nothing more beautiful than the night sky Darlene, the wonders of creation. Tom
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/11/2025 11:18:00 AM
Hello Tom, Yes the it is wonderful at night. When the moon shines with the stars. A beautiful creation. .Enjoy your day my friend. /,Darlene/
Date: 9/11/2025 7:10:00 AM
A lovely evening indeed!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/11/2025 11:13:00 AM
Hello Kim, yes a lovely evening does begins. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 9/9/2025 7:42:00 AM
Dear Darlene, such a peaceful, serene moment! There's something so calming about the way you've painted this evening scene for it feels like taking a deep breath and settling into the quiet beauty of nightfall. Blessings, Darlene, Daniel
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Date: 9/9/2025 10:18:00 AM
Hello Daniel Henry Rodgers, I felt peaceful when creating this poem. I am pleased this poem has an effect 0on you this way. Blessings Daniel. thank you for this wonderful comment. blessings Daniel/ Darlene/
Date: 9/8/2025 8:06:00 PM
A night time of beauty and elegance.....
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/9/2025 10:20:00 AM
Hello Dr. Vandana Sharma, yes lots of beauty. Elegance with the stars. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 9/8/2025 5:53:00 PM
you did a beautiful job with the Kimo form. I enjoyed reading your poem....hugs, Sara
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/9/2025 10:21:00 AM
Hello Sara, thank you Sara. Hugs. enjoy your4 day. /Darlene/
Date: 9/8/2025 1:39:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 9/8/2025 2:10:00 PM
Hello Paula, , Thank you Paula. I will enjoy to write away. . Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 9/8/2025 1:18:00 PM
- A beautiful evening to enjoy, Darlene :) - hugs
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Date: 9/8/2025 2:12:00 PM
hello Anne Lisa Andersen, yes it wouilde be an enjoyable evening to behold. Hugs. /Darlene/ thank you for y0ur lovely comment.
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