Echoes in Silk

Written: July 17, 2025, for contest by Joseph May ******************** Silk voice ties the tunes of the throng As you play the chill, snake-hands song Void doesn't just loom—he swoons and croons Of the throng, silk voice ties the tunes My sound won't cross—cling to your room He swoons and croons—void doesn't just loom Won't quench the charm and delight dross Cling to your room—my sound won't cross I'll break the chain with skillful smarm And delight dross won't quench the charm Haunts the twilight with spry disdain With skillful smarm, I'll break the chain Even my heart can't sate your height With spry disdain, haunts the twilight When the coming spite pours a chart Can't sate your height, even my heart
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Date: 8/6/2025 9:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win in my Contest, Very nicely penned
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Date: 7/18/2025 11:00:00 AM
Greetings my friend. Your poem expresses a deep seeded frustration and sadness that "even your heart," love, can't change the disingenuous "silk voice." This is such a difficult form but you have made it look like child's play. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings dear Lasaad.
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Date: 7/17/2025 5:10:00 PM
I've known folks with those charming silk voices. Their charisma can be overpowering. Your words are engaging and powerful....best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 7/17/2025 12:18:00 PM
Another fav from me today - I loved this, Sotto, it's breathtaking
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Date: 7/17/2025 7:41:00 AM
SP, very difficult indeed to deal with a powerful force we might not be able to overcome. I can think of some these days. Take care!!!
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