Decrepit Static



                                    solutions unfound
                           archaic unchanged condemns~
                             d                
                               e c r e p i t      fetid

angstsenryu

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/18/2025 5:17:00 PM

Creative work and nice picture to go along with the theme. Sara K

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/22/2025 4:42:00 PM

Ty, Sara! Isn't that an amazing painting~

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/10/2025 9:54:00 AM

Dear Anaya, your words always shake me awake, where change, though sometimes tough, brings its own sweetness. Clinging to the past can turn things bitter. I love how you push us to find new solutions, to let go of what’s old, and to embrace the fresh air of growth. Excellent! Blessings, My Dear Anaya, Daniel

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/10/2025 10:30:00 AM

Ty, Daniel your insight is true to my thoughts, and enhances their import. I'm overjoyed with your presence and kind review~ Blessings

Anne Winter

Date: 6/10/2025 5:18:00 AM

A very well crafted and wise senryu, Dear Anaya. Have a wonderful day!

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/10/2025 10:32:00 AM

Ty, sweet Anne. You are an inspiration to us who love poetry but are dilettante and mere dabblers ! Much love to you poetess

Jay Narain

Date: 6/9/2025 11:20:00 AM

Intelligent sneryu. Good one.

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/9/2025 5:50:00 PM

Ty, Jay! Such a nice review~

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/8/2025 7:06:00 PM

Wonderful haiku with fantastic layers of imagery, dear Anaya. Amazing how you can put in just a few syllables. A slight slip in the title. Good luck

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/8/2025 7:17:00 PM

Ty, for both the heads up and kind review, SP. Some folks don't bother to help, I'm not one of those, and I'm so grateful to have a poet friend who gives a damn. Have a nice evening ~ Xhugs :)