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Oliver's Tanka-Haiku Contest ~ August 2, 2025

silence is broken before morning sheds first light chirping in the tree dulcet tunes begin to trill the world dreams, except for me ~ ~ ~ avian crooning lavender sky luminance~ melodies at dawn

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Jim Healey

Date: 8/4/2025 9:02:00 AM

Just beautiful. Congratulations, Lin.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2025 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Great to see your name on the winners' list. Sara K

Lin Lane
Date: 8/4/2025 9:08:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. That’s so very kind of you.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/3/2025 6:25:00 PM

Lin, there's nothing bad about getting up early. Those of us who do get to see and hear a lot. It's a beautiful picture. Thanks for sharing and making me think about getting up early tomorrow morning! Smiles!!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/4/2025 6:55:00 AM

I hope you got up early enough this morning to appreciate the beginning of a new day. It's such a tranquil time of day.

John Fleming

Date: 8/3/2025 12:47:00 PM

Nicely constructed, Lin. Ticks all the right boxes. Good scribbling! :) john

Lin Lane
Date: 8/3/2025 1:21:00 PM

Thanks so very much, John.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/3/2025 10:58:00 AM

Dropping back with congrats Lin, I cant understand why this little gem wasn't at the top of the list, hey ho its only PS! hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/3/2025 11:06:00 AM

It's easy enough to understand when you observe friends of friends, Jan. Subjectively, nonsense, but I don't really give a fig. I write what pleases me and the comments received have far outweighed the placement of one. ;-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/3/2025 10:53:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. Have a blessed day with your win.........

Lin Lane
Date: 8/3/2025 11:04:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly, Paula.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/2/2025 5:57:00 PM

Beautiful!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/2/2025 5:58:00 PM

Thank you, Abdullah. ;-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/2/2025 2:26:00 PM

What a lovely write and pretty picture you have here. Love Both... "Good Luck" Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............

Lin Lane
Date: 8/2/2025 5:58:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly, Paula.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/2/2025 1:19:00 PM

absolutely stunning in every way Lin - a mahoosive fave for me! hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/2/2025 2:20:00 PM

... and a mahoosive thank you for faving this one, Jan!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/2/2025 10:09:00 AM

A beautiful scene to wake up to, with avian crooning too, lovely poetry… Beryl

Lin Lane
Date: 8/2/2025 11:08:00 AM

I wake to their aria each morning but for the rainy ones, and then I enjoy the pitter patter of rain almost as much. Thank you, Beryl.

Deb M

Date: 8/2/2025 9:54:00 AM

Ahhh so very peaceful and comforting Lin….a simply lovely feel good write! Debx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/2/2025 11:07:00 AM

Hi Deb. I like knowing it made you feel peaceful and comforted you. Thanks, Chick.