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be my valentine


don't give me roses
never mind my chocolates -  
all I want is you

valentines daysenryu

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Len Gasun

Date: 2/24/2025 5:20:00 AM

A Valentine's Senryu Contest Judged: 2/9/2025 12:31:00 PM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Place 5 (up to 7 multi-w)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/23/2025 2:58:00 PM

ill have all of the above-- roses, chocolate,and him! sweet congrats on your fine win, len!

Len Gasun
Date: 2/24/2025 5:15:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend and sis Nette. I'm so glad you've them all. Btw, i've changed my mind, I just wanted the chocolate especially Lindt or Lindor Chocolate. It's the best. I could even forget my name and all about love if I've Lindor Chocolate. LOL GB u always and your poetry. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/10/2025 11:39:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "be my valentine" write again. Hugs... Have a great day today and on Valentine's Day.............

Len Gasun
Date: 2/24/2025 5:11:00 AM

Thank you so much belatedly for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Paula. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2025 10:06:00 PM

Love this. Congrats, Len

Len Gasun
Date: 2/24/2025 5:09:00 AM

Thank you so much belatedly my dear poet friend Andrea for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/9/2025 1:59:00 PM

Len, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet senryu.

Len Gasun
Date: 2/24/2025 5:08:00 AM

Belated thank you for acknowledging my work in your contest my dear poet friend Tania. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. Thanks a lot again and God bless you. Hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/8/2025 1:55:00 AM

So beautiful and soul-warming this is!! Such an eloquent senryu for the contest, with a classy declaration of love, coming as a powerful proposal ~ adore how you've painted a vivid scene within such few words and conveyed the sentiments so effortlessly here! Pleasure reading this! Sending light and best wishes for the contest!!

Len Gasun
Date: 2/9/2025 1:32:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Hiya for reading my poem and your very encouraging words. I made it direct because Valentines Day is coming so fast. No going around the bush anymore lol. Thanks again. God bless you always and Happy Valentines in advance. Hugs

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/7/2025 2:48:00 PM

Get down to it, no more flirtation hesitation - this shorty has lengthy volume .. CayCay

Len Gasun
Date: 2/9/2025 1:30:00 AM

Yes, it must be direct to the point because time flies so fast and Valentines Day is fast approaching my dear poet friend Caycay. Thank you so much for reading my poem again. God bless you always and Happy Valentines day in Advance.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/7/2025 11:15:00 AM

What a lovely "be my valentine" write you have here. "Good Luck" Fun Picture. Hugs... Have a fun day as you write away..................

Len Gasun
Date: 2/9/2025 1:28:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging/uplifting words my dear poet friend. Good luck always and have a fun day as you write away too. Hugs. Happy Valentines in advance.

be my valentine

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