All Hallows' Eve

At first I thought it a
random drop of light -- why
not, the universe is full of
yet to be diagnosed, while 
remaining natural mysteries. 

Searing through the dark overcast -- 
perfectly oval, left was a singe, sign of
novel, puncturing intrusion, on what was
already a hoard of unusual flashing nimbus. 

Came a rumble and a roar! 

Such putrid blast! -- common to the bowls of a glutenous fat man, 
at a smorgasbord.  Dark insatiability continued.
A thickening! Bloating stench of atmosphere.  A sense that
could only be likened to pure evil.  Dared seemed my formidable 
curiosity!  Stars, a flickering mass of descending glitter -- 
Was there no bottom to this luminous fall?
I shuddered to think....  But could not turn away. 

What negative presence, had come to disturb the restful nature
of a Southwest summer's night? I did not know.  Could not venture
even a morbid guess.  What all consuming demonic presence -- light alone
seeming incapable of subduing -- rendered every foreboding blotch 
amusing to me!  Entertained my curiosity.  The fouler the contrast, the more
excited became a deep, dank, primitive fantasy I long harbored somewhere inside.  Was it simply spirit 
being infected by a transient, though treatable abscess? Or something far more primitive?  Malevolent?
An enchantment that could not be, once entertained, so easily subdued, extracted from the mind.  From the heart.  Impending doom for a foolishly inquisitive soul.  The ancient document, the incantation
I held in my hands, seeming to radiate an offer of unbridled power.  What would I do?
What would anyone sane mortal do on All Hallows Eve?  Burn the damn thing!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/19/2025 8:59:00 AM
- Don't let curiosity win... throw it on the fire, Joe - A truly great prose poem - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/19/2025 11:37:00 AM
It's gone. Ash! Thank you, Anne; have a great writing day!
Date: 9/19/2025 1:55:00 AM
Great ending, Joe. Hurry and burn it!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/19/2025 4:13:00 AM
Up in smoke; gone...! Thank you, Andrea. Have a great day my friend.
Date: 9/18/2025 11:04:00 PM
Free will is a choice between two good things. One can never or should not choose evil. Rather a difficult concept.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/19/2025 4:16:00 AM
Only two? Doesn't sound free to me. Choices must be unlimited. Absolutely, one should never choose evil...but it is an option. Burn the damn thing!
Date: 9/18/2025 1:22:00 PM
A charged write Joe Dimino.' Don't give The devil a foothold is my thought here.'
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/18/2025 1:53:00 PM
Evil can appear, as pure and pretty -- or simply a fun, thrilling though harmless romp. Discernment is paramount. Thank you, Joe.
Date: 9/18/2025 6:40:00 AM
Ha !, Joe. You managed to extract it from both mind & Heart. That is what I call Halloween Power ! I enjoyed line > infected by a transient, though treatable abscess...these arisings are all treatable. I enjoyed this darkish read today. ThkU for posting.x.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/18/2025 12:20:00 PM
Absolutely! When we stop hitting ourselves in the head with a spiritual hammer, the headache will stop. We do it all to ourselves. Now, there are those out there that will say, God is in Control! That too. They don't get it. They have no idea what Free Will is. They think Free Will is simply the right to choose right from wrong. The ability to simply make choices...which is really just a surface understanding. Blessings my friend. Have a great writing day!
Date: 9/17/2025 7:29:00 PM
Lol. You've got the right idea. Have a Happy Halloween.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/18/2025 4:03:00 AM
Hi Hilda; just fun stuff, getting my Halloween on early this year. Happy you got a chuckle out of it. My intension. Have a great day my friend!
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