A Rich Rhyme

Louis Watson loved well made, toy ships, and had a fine collection, Since father was a sailor himself. Like aged wind's novel directions. Louis loved sailing toy ships on Crystal Pond, like gaiety filled youth. He'd pretend they sailed on open seas, laden with candies and fruit! His family lived on the edge of town, beneath pink-beige starlight, Looming as evening warblers began singing, to scarlet Mars' delight. Louis had fun with best friend, Fred. They had boat races, ofttimes. Ships flew to the pond's far side and back, overseen by green pines. Rain's tinkling footsteps had faded, into gold sunset's famed flames; When family, of heart's familiarity came, like blossoms uncontained! Louis lived in the house of endless motion, like eternal, teal waves, Full of plans, murmurs, creeping and dashes, in butterscotch days. Scandalous thunder left scarlet skies appalled, amidst fragrant dusk; Over their street of songbird sonatas, and of lemon breezes, brusque. Nights nuanced by northern lights, had neighbors arriving for visits; Bypassing bittersweet nightshade, or scents riding gusts, like spirits! 'Silver vases' held their own flowers. The thirsty poured 'snake gourds.' 'Elephant apples' fed large appetites, as 'cannonball' blooms, warred. 'Zinderella' lilac got dressed for the ball, but 'Billy Button' was ready; When 'starflowers lit up nights, and 'voyage champange,' felt heady. Louis dreamt of owning a unique ship, for his birthday was coming; Like colorful birds dream of nectar, when they are sweetly humming. As his birthday dawned, pink and golden, his hopes were surpassed, When he saw his dream ship, and its rhyme written by Father, at last! Father had entered a toy shop, after seeing a rare ship in a faux pond; And soon bought that pretty ship, like many marvels, du vaste monde! I saw a ship a-sailing, A-sailing on the sea. And, oh, but it was laden With pretty things for thee! There were comfits in the cabin, And apples in the hold, The sails were made of silk, And the masts were all of gold. The four-and-twenty sailors, That stood between the decks, Were four-and-twenty white mice, With chains about their necks. The captain was a duck, With a packet on his back, And when the ship began to move, The captain said, "Quack! Quack!"
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Date: 8/18/2025 2:01:00 AM
Evelyn, you're a wonder. I always look forwards for your Saturday couplets and now short poems too. Great poetry.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/18/2025 11:11:00 PM
Your words bring happiness, dear Victor. Thank you for your gracious comments. :)
Date: 8/17/2025 1:52:00 PM
In mirthful echoes, a prank unfolds, Evelyn. I cherished this fanciful verse, adorned with a captivating starting point.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2025 4:49:00 PM
Thank you for the genuine joy elicited by your kind remarks, Sotto. It was a pleasure to read this. Blessings.
Date: 8/16/2025 3:14:00 PM
Laughing, so funny. I loved this whimsical poem with an intriguing introducktion. Lol.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/16/2025 6:18:00 PM
I'm so happy that you got a laugh from this story, Hilda. Thank you very much for your words of appreciation. :D
Date: 8/16/2025 12:18:00 PM
WOW!!! What a creative/fun ~ write/story you have here with a Cute Picture. Love It... You should be writing books. Have a fun day/weekend writing away..........
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/16/2025 6:15:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for your gracious remarks. I'm happy that you enjoyed my story, and it thrills me that you could see me writing books. You have a joy filled day and weekend, too. :)
Date: 8/16/2025 5:18:00 AM
You pull up some interesting nursery rhymes I've never seen, always providing an even more interesting back story. Louis' family life seems ideal and his father a gem
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/16/2025 6:06:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely compliments, Tom. Your comment is such a delight! I doubt if there's anyone who's heard all the nursery rhymes-there are so many! But, that is a good thing for children. Blessings. :)
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