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Written 19th January 2025

Cravings Flaming

 My cravings flaming in a dumpster fire
Ridding me of my secret heart’s desire
Every chocolate bar
All candies in a jar
Gone so the raver in me can transpire.

candycrushlimerick

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/14/2025 12:06:00 PM

Beryl, I'm seeing the fire and wondering if it would be just that simple to stop cravings. We have such a desperate society! Hope you are well and smiling!! Thanks for this very cute read!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/9/2025 7:56:00 AM

Beryl this is a delightful poem for a dull Sunday I love it. Keep them coming hugs Shadow

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/9/2025 9:39:00 AM

Thank you Shadow, Limericks are my all time favourites, except for the candies that is… Beryl

Jan Allison

Date: 1/24/2025 2:52:00 PM

your poem made me smile Beryl. I hold back from opening chocs as once that wrapper is undone ... so are the chocs lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/24/2025 3:03:00 PM

Thank you Jan, same here, one taste and that’s it, can’t put back the chocolate lid… Hugs sent back, Beryl xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2025 11:36:00 AM

Oh no, burning chocolates!!! Good one, Beryl.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/24/2025 11:41:00 AM

Hi Andrea, to be honest unwanted sweets and chocolates I only have to put in our owners lounge and they are gone in a flash. Burning chocolates would be a sin, when there’s those that can’t resist it, and possibly can’t afford it… Beryl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/21/2025 2:58:00 AM

- (always a guilty conscience...) - Don't throw it away, enjoy it, Beryl :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/23/2025 5:49:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise, I will enjoy it and start the diet again on Monday, that’s the day my diet starts every week, it only lasts a day… Beryl ( Not for any contest )

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/20/2025 2:29:00 PM

Great luck Beryl.as I get older, i dont have cravings,such an ingenious write, Love, Pangie xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2025 2:44:00 PM

Neither do I Pangie, I’m glad to say. Thank you, love Beryl xx

Tom Woody

Date: 1/19/2025 10:02:00 AM

GAAA! Please say you saved some dark chocolate from the Big Melt

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2025 1:05:00 AM

Saved, Tom the dark chocolate is coming your way… Beryl

John Read

Date: 1/19/2025 9:56:00 AM

A little treat is quite okay, just as long as you don't indulge everyday, wish you well in the contest sister Beryl. xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2025 1:03:00 AM

Contest? Thank you brother John, I agree, a treat now and again shouldn’t do any harm, and can be a soothing balm… Sis Beryl

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/19/2025 9:08:00 AM

Hi Beryl: I still have a bag of Moose Munch I haven’t opened yet. Can you please tell me where this dumpster is located ???? lol Fun poem.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2025 1:00:00 AM

Hi Suzanne, the dumpster is in the yard, here in the Uk, you’re welcome to share the fire, though distance makes it a difficulty. Thank you, Beryl

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/19/2025 8:03:00 AM

Dear Beryl, oh yes, "My cravings flaming in a dumpster fire" too after the holidays gifted me a few extra pounds lol! I enjoyed your witty and relatable limerick. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/19/2025 8:37:00 AM

Thank you poet pal Susan, that’s the trouble when we indulge, we have to do the battle of the bulge… Beryl

Written 19th January 2025

Cravings Flaming

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