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Brian's 1409 Senryu Contest ~ 9/3/25

1409

dreams had taken flight
  beneath a star riddled sky ~
    I embraced the night

dreamsenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2025 7:51:00 PM

Congratulations a very well deserved win

Lin Lane
Date: 9/7/2025 7:11:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/6/2025 12:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "1409" write. Great Picture... Few words with much said. Good night-Good sleep.... Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away........

Lin Lane
Date: 9/7/2025 7:11:00 AM

Thanks for your every gracious thoughts, Paula

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2025 1:23:00 AM

- Sounds like a wonderful night, Lin :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 9/7/2025 7:11:00 AM

Must've been, Anne-Lise and thanks!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/3/2025 2:32:00 PM

Fantastic poem! Love the wording!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/3/2025 2:57:00 PM

I'm truly pleased. Thanks, Kim.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2025 2:27:00 PM

Wonderful. We did the same theme about dreams!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/3/2025 2:56:00 PM

I haven't read many others, but I promise to read yours. Thanks, Andrea.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/3/2025 9:21:00 AM

It's simple but comforting. I feel warm peace.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/3/2025 2:56:00 PM

Such is the stuff dreams are made of Hilda. Thank you lots!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/3/2025 9:09:00 AM

Dear Lin, There’s such quiet courage and wonder in the way you move through darkness and embrace what’s beyond. It's like you’re inviting us to soar alongside your dreams. Blessings, Dear Lin, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 9/3/2025 2:55:00 PM

Hi Daniel. Your comments are so complimentary that I feel underserving of them for just 17 syllables. However, I take your thoughts to heart, and if you find my flights worthy, you're welcome to join me any time.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/3/2025 7:59:00 AM

How often I've had a lovely dream and on waking tried to turn over and continue only for my brain to say get your lazy ass outta bed lol Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 9/3/2025 8:05:00 AM

Oh my gosh, Tom. That's too funny.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/3/2025 7:16:00 AM

makes me want to head for bed Lin!! hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 9/3/2025 7:45:00 AM

You're already 6 hours ahead of me, chick... Thanks.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/3/2025 7:06:00 AM

Lin, it's wonderful when we can fall asleep knowing that our dreams will reflect the magic in our lives. This is something to think about when getting ready for bed. Something to appreciate and anticipate. I think I will try it this evening. Thanks for this poem and what I can take as a suggestion from it. It's not often that a poem can change our behavior, but you've done it! Smiles and Tys for this homer!!!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/3/2025 7:44:00 AM

I don't often dream, Duke. Probably because I don't sleep enough consecutive hours to sleep deeply enough. Thanks for liking these lines so well.

Brian's 1409 Senryu Contest ~ 9/3/25

1409

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