02.05.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Immortality -


                                 Angelically controlled power
                                                           quiet, fading
                                 Eternal life 
                                 lacking references -

                                 Hypothetically obscurity
                                 Endangered vulnerable hearts
                                              -  triumph yet to come
                                          truths we cannot scorn

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/9/2025 12:03:00 PM

Anne-Lise, your poem expresses the possibility of an afterlife in the nicest and most positive way I've ever seen. Most religions have very specific beliefs, but it's hard to believe that they can all be correct. What you have is very uplifting and sweet for people with faith on this topic. Smiles!!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/3/2025 7:03:00 AM

Anne-Lise, your lines are lovely, and the artwork you selected is stunning. How you've organized your words! The writing is really easy to read! Good luck with the contest

Ink Empress

Date: 5/3/2025 6:38:00 AM

" triumph yet to come" that line stood out the most for me dear anne Lise, i also love the picture and the way your words are arranged! In a way that can be read at such ease! Pleasure visiting you today! Best wishes! Sending you light always