- Haiku X 371 - eat me -


                                          passionate desire
                                      satisfying your cravings -
                                       sweet wild raspberries

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Terry Flood

Date: 8/4/2025 4:24:00 PM

We have them in abundance…. Well, we would if the blackbirds didn’t snaffle them all. And if the blackbirds should leave even one… my wife nabs that! So… as far as I recall… I love raspberries. Tasty write, Anne-Lise

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/4/2025 1:18:00 PM

mmm…yummy poem…lol - title!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2025 11:08:00 AM

Yummm, One of my favorite berries.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/4/2025 2:34:00 AM

I love all berries. Pity we don't get them in Malta. Lovely picture too. Hugs.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 8/3/2025 7:58:00 PM

Lovely Enjoyed reading the poem

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/3/2025 7:54:00 PM

Delicious write!!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/3/2025 5:22:00 PM

outstanding Haiku, Anne-Lise! Must fave!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/3/2025 2:00:00 PM

Excellent Haiku! Among the finest I've read in a long time. There isn't a single incorrect assumption in it. Well done! Anne Lise

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/3/2025 12:43:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely Haiku write. Great Picture, looks like I could pick them. I have not had any in a long time but I do love to eat them. Hugs... Have a wonderful day eating and writing away...........

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2025 12:52:00 PM