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I reside in Maryland, with my dogs Echo & Tango & Anchovy
Never forgetting:

Whatsoever thy hand findeth to do, do it with thy might; for there is no work, nor device, nor knowledge, nor wisdom, in the grave, whither thou goest.   ~ Ecclesiastes 9:10

Lyrics I - Tomahawk Finalized

Blog Posted:4/23/2016 8:58:00 PM

6 NAs

  •  3 Uploaded before 03.22.16
  •  1 Name inclusion
  •  1 greater than 40 lines
  •  1 Homophone

1    God's Cowards                                        John lawless
1    SHERIFF'S LAST RIDE                          nette onclaud
1     Disillusioned Prophet                              Silent One
2    Surfing the Sewer                                    Rita A. Simmonds
2    A Lovers Throw                                        Rhoda Monihan
3    Love in barren land                                  Dr. Upma A. Sharma
3    Lyrics                                                        Laura Loo
3    Lament of a Banshee Cowboy                 Andrea Dietrich
4    Like a Bee in a Bottle                               Moon Flower
4    Satan's Apple                                           Balveen Cheema
4    God Hates a Coward                                Kit S
5    Next To Misery                                          Tim Smith
5    My immortal state                                     Seren Roberts
6    Once He Had Some Pedigree                  Broken Wings
6    Not good enough                                      Julia Ward
7    LONE FIGHTER                                       Anisha Dutta
7    God Weeps Because I Am a Coward       Ettel Brown
8    They got them in the end                          Stephen Pennell
8    The Rooster And The Mandrake              Mystic Rose
9    Purification                                                Tom Quigley
10    Song for my boy Freddy                         Shawn Padilla
10    If it were not for you                                Abdul Malik
11    your 'love you'  was the biggest lie         mayur gelod
11    Power of One                                         Anfaney Booth
12    mirror of war                                          charlotte prentis
12    Mother's love                                         Shivdas Ashtekar
12    O' Dear Mother                                      Manmath Dalei

I want to thank and congratulate all participants.

The poems titled "Casino Lights Love" and "Sparkles and Glitter" I really liked, but had to give NAs due to rule violations.

Any questions, just post them below or soup mail.

Rob



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Nette
Onclaud
Date: 4/24/2016 4:39:00 PM
ohh, snickers is happy to be part of boo's challenge, rob.. thanks for appreciating this one... congrats to your contestants!..huggs
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/24/2016 7:00:00 PM
Boo had a three hour challenge today, a few of the neighbors were shooting. Boo was so scared, he didn't even want one of his treats. Thanks with hugs back to you.
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Andrea
Dietrich
Date: 4/24/2016 10:16:00 AM
Rob, I am glad you liked my Banshee Cowboy. It was a lucky stroke of fate for me that this show i watch on Cinemax fit with the song you showed us. Congrats to all your winners.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/24/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for your support and friendship. I liked how the dynamics of contest turned out.
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Tim
Smith
Date: 4/24/2016 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Rob for my placement and for hosting. Congratulations to all the winners.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/24/2016 11:12:00 AM
It has been a while since you entered a contest of mine. Nice to have seen you again.
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Constance
La France
Date: 4/24/2016 7:08:00 AM
Rob, thanks for another great contest and for my fine placement, very honored and congratulations to all your winners ~
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/24/2016 11:08:00 AM
You're welcome Constance.
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Stephen
Pennell
Date: 4/24/2016 1:48:00 AM
many thanks for the placement officer carmack stephen :-)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/24/2016 11:07:00 AM
Thanks Stephen.
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Moon
Flower
Date: 4/24/2016 12:41:00 AM
Placement is much appreciated. You're such an awesome one. ;) Congrats to all the winners!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/24/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thanks, speaking of awesome, I like your name.

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