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A Palindrome Called Temptation

A Palindrome, also called Mirrored Poetry, is a poetry type not listed, so I put it under Free Verse. If anyone finds a better categoy for this please let me know. Thomas ______________________________________________________________________ Temptation Temptation And **** replaced love Day after day We are bombarded Sex and beauty Objects over heart Thoughts lustful, confused reality Isolation supplanted communication Clouds out move clarity Facade my life ~Redemption~ Life my facade Clarity move out clouds Communication supplanted isolation Reality confused lustful thoughts Heart over objects Beauty and sex Bombarded are we Day after day Love replaced **** and Temptation

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Rob Carmack

Date: 12/10/2015 2:46:00 PM

This is brilliant and going on the list.

Thomas Carney
Date: 12/11/2015 4:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Mr. Rob Carmack. How nice of you. This was my first Palindrome and took a long time to write. I appreciate you sir. Thomas

Tanya Campos-Gracia

Date: 10/4/2015 3:31:00 PM

TEMPTATION- Strong word... Yes control, is a good thing... some of us have, some don't, but, it lurks... You're awesome... You're good, and you're special, Blessing be, always with you... Tanya

Thomas Carney
Date: 5/4/2016 10:52:00 AM

Thanks again for your reply missy. Thomas :)

Thomas Carney
Date: 12/11/2015 4:18:00 PM

You are awesome as well Miss Tanya. Of course you wrote this over 2 months ago so I hope the positives remain in check. Temptation is not a sin, so in a way it's a nice thing if one could just appreciate things for what they are and move on. :) Hugs 2U Thomas

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2015 10:49:00 AM

Yes, there have been some competitions on here using Palindrome..It is not so easy to write..Good job..I don't know any other catergory that you could enter it under though..Sara

Thomas Carney
Date: 2/20/2015 6:35:00 PM

Thanks Sara. Hope you are doing okay. Peace. Thomas

John Posey

Date: 9/1/2014 11:52:00 AM

Well done, my friend..... Cryptic beauty surrounds indescribable wisdom..... really nice work...... Jake

Thomas Carney
Date: 9/2/2014 5:15:00 PM

Thank you sir. I appreciate you taking the time to read this. Am looking forward to more time on PS. Thomas