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Read Poems by Ashley Smith

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My heart beats to the sound of your name
but when you're gone I wonder if it can beat again
Words mean nothing without proof there's intention as the basis
We're running in the same direction but in two different races
My heart's all in, my mind's all out of sorts waiting for you
Unfortunately my wish for us isnt' going to come true
You can't commit to staying here, you can't commit love to show
And at the end of the day, I'm the same way, I can't commit to letting go

Copyright © Ashley Smith | Year Posted 2013

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 9:42:00 AM

    deep.... great couplets... love PD

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