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The Truth of the matter
Amidst Lies getting fatter
Is that THIS will all shatter,
And one day we'll fall

We'll master Disaster
And crash that much faster
Our remains left scattered
In the Ruin of All

Copyright © Just That Archaic Poet | Year Posted 2014

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  1. Date: 8/17/2015 6:48:00 PM

    Miss you so so so much Chan.... love you to death hon, as you always used to say! Love always, Laura
  1. Date: 11/8/2014 9:45:00 AM

    Chan, you have now passed on to the next life. I just learned this at Deb's blog. I feel sad that I did not know you better. I see this is your last poem. You are in a place now where you can see plainly the black and white. You have escaped the grief of this world. I know things were hard for you and I am saddened we did not get to see more of you before your death. Hope you are looking down and can read my remarks. Only the good die young, Chan, and you are an example of that.
  1. Date: 9/26/2014 9:49:00 AM

    A catchy write my friend.
  1. Date: 9/24/2014 5:12:00 PM

    Very clever! I really enjoyed reading this poem. I hope you are doing well! Miss you! Always, Laura
  1. Date: 8/13/2014 12:48:00 AM

    The truth will always fight it's way free, and when it does we had better be ready for the aftermath.... I loved these wise words, BP! A terrific poem! :)
  1. Date: 8/10/2014 6:13:00 AM

    Very cleverly written with nice rhymes, JTAP

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