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My Forgotten Valentine

Deep blue and charismatic, slightly naughty yet kind
I wonder what they searched for, as his eyes bore into mine
I think he had ruffled hair, but I can’t exactly recall
All that I remember is that his eyes had made me fall

He looked at me I looked at him, and a new world begun
I had a new set of feelings, a new type of fun
My heart, felt heavier, I was floating in mid-air
I had the strongest urge to look pretty with my hair

His eyes were so deep they had a gravity of their own
Pulling me so strong, like I was meant to take this throne
I had seen in films, what love was actually like
But never had I experienced it, nor this emotional hike

“Sorry” he sexily said when he accidentally dropped my books
“No problem” I managed to say focusing hard on my looks
But he just looked around, and simply walked away
After taking a few steps, he turned to look my way

That got me excited, and he gave a crooked smile
My heartbeat sped, and I was mesmerized by his style
I wish I’d stopped to talk to him, but my voice cracked
That was the last we met, and that’s a hard fact

Was he a devilish angel, or an angelic devil?
Well, at least my first love didn’t cause me any trouble
I so really wish I still remembered his face
Nevertheless, his eyes’ memory remains…

Copyright © Apoorva Patrikar | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 9/13/2024 2:28:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Date: 2/21/2016 4:14:00 PM

apoorva patrikar, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
Date: 10/7/2015 11:24:00 AM

WOW, it's been forever since you've been on poetry soup. Enjoyed this reading this write. SKAT
Date: 5/20/2013 8:00:00 AM

Wow!! I especially love your phrase "devilish angel or an angelic devil". Great poetry, Apoorva. Licia :-)
Date: 3/12/2013 6:42:00 PM

great write Apoorva...the gravity line was great...thanks for stopping by
Date: 2/12/2013 7:18:00 PM

Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. Light & love
Date: 2/12/2013 10:41:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your win Apoorva xx
Date: 2/11/2013 9:19:00 PM

Apoorva:-) ... Congratulations, with your awesome poem in Debra s "The Forgotten Valentine... " contest... glad to see you on the winning list. Always & Forever* PD
Date: 2/11/2013 1:11:00 PM

You are on my list of winners !! Congratulations !! Thank you for supporting my contest and also for this beautiful read. Excellent poetry !!
Date: 2/11/2013 9:47:00 AM

This is superbly beautiful poem my dear friend, Apoorva. I extremely enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing. A winning piece for sure. Well, good luck and best wishes always. Thank you you so much also for your stopping by and your congratulatory comments. Have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora
Date: 2/10/2013 1:45:00 AM

A very nice write, Apoorva, Everyone reading this should be recalling similar scenes from their lives, wellwritten:) Jag
Date: 2/9/2013 6:11:00 PM

This reminds me of one of the scenes from our Hindi movies. Way back there was a movie called Mere Mehboob and it had a similar scene. You brought it out nicely.
Date: 2/4/2013 11:09:00 PM

I really really enjoyed this one. It reminded me so much of a few of the guys I had liked in high school who seemed to like me and yet nothing ever went anywhere with them. Makes ya wonder and you can barely remember their faces, yet you know how awesome they seemed to you in the moment. Hope this does well in the contest.
Date: 2/4/2013 9:40:00 AM

great poem, awwww he should have stayed around for you. Seren

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