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Elephant

There’s an elephant in the room
He lets me know not to assume

He fast forwards, determining fate
He rewinds, finding the faulty gate

He can see me but I can’t see him
He can see the wick burning dim 

I am an imposter of this person called me
I know he knows what isn’t honesty 

This elephant has taken control
Hands on the reigns he has taken his toll 

I lay restless upon this darkened hour
Stripped of my already lifeless power

Copyright © Lauren H. | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/18/2026 7:49:00 AM

I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Date: 5/3/2024 1:04:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."
Date: 2/11/2016 11:15:00 AM

LAUREN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA
Date: 4/13/2010 9:22:00 PM

Awesome write!
Date: 4/13/2010 9:22:00 PM

I enjoyed the couplets with fine rhyming

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