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Waltz of Four Left Feet

Can you imagine your life if you haven't met me?

It was a cold day in December when all of this started. You, being the silly you, asked me something out of the blue. It was a request that I couldn't refuse and unconsciously, the best "Yes" that I have ever given.

From then, we embarked on a beautiful journey to brave the waters of love and the dance of destiny. We are soulmates, I know that for sure because I've never felt my soul in sync with anyone else. Oh how I really wish to be one with you. You are the embodiment of all the poetry that I write. My muse, my inspiration, my heart's companion. Oh, to merge my soul with you is like how the skies merge with the shore at sunset. Delicate, beautiful and dark. I don't need anything else to live, I just need you, my everything.

In this waltz of four left feet, there's music and harmony. But sadly, the rhythm is messy. We live in a different tempo and this forbidden dance makes it hard to let go.

Copyright © Jessa Erandio | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 5/13/2024 7:37:00 AM

Dear Jessa, What a beautifully raw portrayal of a love story. The cold December start, the "unconsciously perfect Yes"—it captures the magic of your beginning. The soulmate connection, the desire to be one, the muse imagery—it's all seems so true. The sunset metaphor for your merging souls is breathtaking. Loved Reading it!- Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/13/2024 6:13:00 AM

The longing, passion, affection, melancholy in your words are so evident my dearest... I loved how you wrote, "Oh how I really wish to be one with you." and "my heart's companion" Your whole writing is truly a touching love confession. Also, the ending is just beautifully aching. Loved this whole piece.

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