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Crybaby

To the fourth grade quiet kid crying on the playground:
                                                         keep crying.
Let the burning blur in your pupils reverberate your vision
envision maculas becoming galaxies of simultaneous starbursts
normalizing irises marbleized in emotional flow

       Drift
in whatever you are feeling at this very moment
                                    Drown
out cacophonies of every synonym for “crybaby”
your classmates can regurgitate

Hold on to your emotion regardless of how hard it’s pulled from your grip
The greatest thing you can be is emotional
because breakdown doesn’t equate broken down
doesn’t equal malfunction    error    glitch in your system

The greatest thing you can be is broken
    metal bends beyond repair; skin is resilient
    cut wrists will heal; cut wires won’t regenerate
biology is not biomechanical.

It took until nearly twenty-three for me
to learn having heavy emotions
is just in my biology
and I will never let shame be programmed into me

for being that fourth grade quiet kid
crying on the playground
that crybaby
tracking muds from trailing tears in the dirt

I learned
the greatest thing you can be is yourself
when nobody is watching: yourself
as staring gazes and whispers fill space

asking why you’re sobbing so much
It’s because you’re human.

The greatest thing you can be
is human.

Copyright © Talon Drake | Year Posted 2025


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Poet on the Mic

Poet don’t feel right
Poet struggles sleeping at night
POETS NEVER SLEEP

At least…that’s what other poets keep telling me
But this lackluster slumbering just might be
From the unwavering weight of all responsibility

Poet only seems awake while walking through daydreams
Only wants to live life lavished in imagination
Painting alternate universes in which the stars guide me

An alternate universe in which i am happy
The moon and its tides constantly aligned 
An alternate universe in which my artistry arrives unagonized

An alternate universe already constructed by someone else
An alternate universe in which contains an atmosphere in which I can breathe in which should be the one I’m in now 

But my nervous system glitches, 
Spine tinges    spitting gibberish
Jittering    shaky legs racing while staying stationary 
Amazed at the way 
A stage shakes me
In vibrations 

At least its safe to say I said something today
Shared a story shoved, cornered in a junk drawer 
At least I keep poetry in motion
only productive when my mind’s flowing

But I know my audience
I know they’re only hearing my poet voice 
They only see my tragedies rehashed in romantics 

There's only so many ways to manipulate the pain staked 
    in my chest           in my throat               in my head

So I choke on my raw truth 
so it’s more digestible 
for everybody else in the room

If not on the page,
Where is a tortured artists’ pain safe?

Paper scrapes
Psalms
Poems
Cutting deep enough
For me to bleed enough 

For you to envision the misery 
I’m in
Some alternate universe in which I am not a poet

Instead,
             I am illiterate at the expense of my own pen and tongue
Instead, I await the unarriving;
             Bleeding out without any sign of rescue
Instead, I plagiarize my inhabitance to a world
             constructed by everyone except myself

Instead,
I am here

Earth rotates
Everything else still
I am still
Here.

Copyright © Talon Drake | Year Posted 2025

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Strapped In

We’re at a standstill—
a standoff of semi-automatic emotion, knowing

in our instability, we pull each other’s triggers
and cannot truly be capable of loving one another.

But I’m still begging him not to give up 
like I'm begging him not to shoot.

Copyright © Talon Drake | Year Posted 2025

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Beyond the Blackbox


Attention:
This one is the problem child.

Mom and dad deny autonomy
take authority over a diary
supervised at all times; no privacy
door hinge wide open
so why are the walls closing in?

This home is an emotion free zone
Mom says save it for therapy
but stops taking me
says my borderline personality is burdening this family’s budget
believes I’ll be cured if she just burns enough cliches into my brain
“Just be happy with what you have,
what have you crafted in your head that is such a tragedy?"

I got pills to pop and prices to pay
I got emotions but I keep 'em oceans away
beyond the combination lock on a black box
Warning:
This medication may make it worse.
Unbearable.
And ain’t that just ironic?
peace of mind partners with possibilities
of seeming more psychotic
but it’s better this way.
				Right?

Anticipate a thirty day delay
and lag like yesterday on your last leg
It’s better this way.
burrow into bed and brand yourself braindead

Just pretend, society says, suffer silently!
act as if any abnormality is absent
accept that it’s actually an act
learn to lock down your breakdowns
let them drown to the box’s rock bottom

Growing sick of cloaking conflicts
in courtesy of concealing others' comfort
so sorry if you choke
I will not spoon feed what you can’t swallow
I will scream my anxieties
annunciate every aspect of agony
trapping me where serotonin's lacking 

Lab rat crawling its way back
taste-testing chill pills
forgetting how to feel real
sleepwalking through a social setting
so sick, yeah, I’m real ill

Everyone tends to forget, 
the tension doesn’t rest when the poem ends.

Copyright © Talon Drake | Year Posted 2025

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The Silent Kiss

At dawn,  
you graze my face 
tracing my jawline with your thumb to say:
“It’s nice to have someone here for once.”

I should know better than obsessing over men
whose attention doesn’t need begging 
stitching myself into bedsheets 
meant to be left half empty

but I guess you just get me. 

If home is a body,
I already sense aftershocks 
self-inflicted eviction setting in 
slipping away half asleep

dreading the inevitability of leaving.

Copyright © Talon Drake | Year Posted 2025


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Detroit vs Everybody

How pretty
is the motor city
under neon diodes?

I sent my heart
into its stars
exhaled my soul
into rustbelt smoke

maybe I’ve lost my mind
or rather it’s left behind
my sanity abandoned
and blighted

my memories subjected
to successive evictions
—just up and forget ‘em—

I guess the city could
enlighten me a bit
on resilience

Copyright © Talon Drake | Year Posted 2025

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End Credits

On the last day of the week
you were the first person to ask me
on a movie date

          and this was the first time     I refrained from hesitation
        the first time in a long time     I've loaned my bones expose

                      and as it plays on     my unforgivable fidgeting
	                              begins     twisting in positions in my seat
		                       trying     to lay my head on your chest
	                             without     breaking my neck

                            and I’m sorry     I couldn’t just 
				                    become comfortable
		            and I’m sorry     it’s about more than
				                    just the movie
        		   and I’m sorry      I was more focused 
			                            on what I wanted taken 
				                    than was capable of giving
		           and I’m sorry      all I can do is sputter off              				                                                                                            
                                                    apologies after you've
				                    long since stopped listening

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Leap

Since the day 
you became a news story,
I've been wondering 
how long you spent
pondering the pavement.

Wondering
what thoughts oscillated 
through your racing brain
in competition with your heartbeat.

Wondering
if you envisioned 
flickering projections of memories 
you can't rest with.

Wondering
just how it feels to be 
a magnitude against the interstate
as gravity chalks a body's outline into the earth

Wondering
who could be the culprit in this case?
You were just a victim of blunt-force; 
caution taped into an unclaimed crime scene.

Wondering
if you jumped in spite of joy
if being alive is to expand your lungs in full exhale
if being dead is to put an end to restlessness

Wondering
what emotion is present as you
leap.

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Abandonment and Other Magic Tricks

I hope he makes you feel 		   at home
hope it’s sweet when he’s singing you songs

I’m sorry I choked 	  chewing on 
my own tongue for too long

You’ve moved out
		and moved on
Making vacancy space inside my arms
but there’s something I’m still clung on

Vagabond who can’t wander on
or let go of that glimmer of home
I wasn’t living in love 
but I was somewhere so close

Does he listen when you’re silent?
Does he watch you as you sleep?
Is it everything we were supposed to have?
I can’t help but feel like the trick’s on me

You said
	            he makes you feel	
			                          like magic.

and I transcended, disappearing from the picture
as I imagined your passion

watched       
                 my love story
    col  lapse 
                in
                  to 
                        trag   
                               edy
                                     in a second 
                                                        and a half.

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Isolated in Crowded Places

If life is a party--
I stay halfway in the doorway
half-hoping nobody notices me
half-wishing somebody does

The question, is it really having fun
when one has to force it so much?

If I would’ve just stayed home
the comfort of my own bubble
I wouldn’t have to sweat beneath 
this mask of confidence

I just want to camouflage myself under neon
I just want the music to mute the loudness my mind sounds
I just want to live amongst the chatter and laughter
without worrying if it’s at my expense 

If life is a party
why am I the only one alone here?
The room is loud
but I’m swallowed by silence
surrounded yet untouched

I shove myself so far into my solitude
I’ve made my safe space
no longer retreatable
                                      unbreathable, 

                suffocation 

                                        isolation

My therapist says I can’t have my cake and eat it too.
Says, “It’s not that nobody likes you, you just don’t let people know you”

Loneliness eats at me 
like the greedy eat cake and have it too

                         chews me up, 
                       
spits me out,
                                          swallows me whole,
                    
               scarfs me down

I am park abandoned
amusement removed
Once epicenter of joy
Now decayed, movement drained
Welcoming no one--no refunds 

If life is a party
I’m pinata perked with push pins
Loneliness sticks, sinks into me
Driving deeper with each impact 

 beaten
              
               battered                              
                                 
                               shaken  
   
         shattered

I long to poke through the loneliness 
ballooning inside and bid it soar
but there’s only so much reality
you can bend for a metaphor 

It’s my party and I’ll holler all I want to
I think it’s time I reclaimed the stage
instead of shrinking myself so small
under my own spotlight

I am sick of being a background character
in my own stories I share
I am jealous of feeling empty
when everyone else belongs

So here I am
rainbow, glitter, and all that glam

Ain’t I fantastic? 

Ain’t I the last 
performance you were expecting tonight?

I am the hard liquor that can’t be held down
I am the tempo that can’t be kept up with
I am human being deserving of celebration

I am the last performance
you were expecting tonight

but I didn’t come just
to leave quietly

I came to be the life of the party.

Copyright © Talon Drake | Year Posted 2025

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