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My Golden Precious

Here I am again on this path
Rejected by me and others journey through this sweet agony road
Through the thorn and pain
Some crowned it with ring
Sentence to life imprisonment where individualism is eliminated
I pray for such ending
Previous knowledge evidently denied penultimate line

All I ever need is desired by others
Cherish and adore by them
I called them frienemy not rival 
That’s what makes her precious
To win her previous knowledge must be eliminated

My home is my enemy as I kiss her door frequently
My phone is my best friend when we are part
I empty my pocket to fill her heart
BBM, 2go, facebook, SMS are my mediator
Expression of feeling through words is my talent
The perfection of every relationship is uneconomical to truthful and fervent communication 
I effectively utilized my talent
Victory at last

Alter is calling at the penultimate month
Divinely approved
Journey were made to her root
Finally she is mine
Cherishing my golden ring
She is my Golden Precious
Home at last

Cathartic Healing...

the simple truth 
many do not speak 
many do not know 
many souls retreat...

the words do not lie 
the man behind does 

from president to priest 
history records acts of deceit 
unethical concerns exist 

unauthorized remorse 
life uneconomical 
people sent to die 

indifferent religion? 
gassed, shot, torture, hung 
with a lie this all begun? 

A simple man, 
in a mad mans head 
economics enough to ensure 
millions dead... 

search, ask who is in charge- 
a mad man? his lie? 
your lie, your life?

Cathartic Healing

the simple truth 
many do not speak 
many do not know 
many have forgot 

the words do not lie 
the man behind does 

from president to priest 
history records acts of deceit 
unethical concern exist 

unauthorized remorse 
life uneconomical 
people sent to die 

indifferent religion? 
gassed, shot, torture, hung 
with a lie this all begun? 

A simple man, 
in a mad mans head 
economics enough to ensure 
millions dead 

search, ask who is in charge- 
a mad man? his lie? 
your lie, your life?


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