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Premium Member The Ponds of Blood Road

Along the blood road there are thousands of ponds.
Carved out by American bombs.
A futile attempt to blast communism
into the next millennium.

It'll take a hundred years to remove 
unexploded ordinances.
Children mistake them for shiny toys.
Every day is black Christmas for children
who play along the blood road.

The metal from war doesn't go to waste.
The skin of bombs is made into skiffs. 
That putter around the delta mist.
Some taking in round-eyed tourists...
Who're eager to see how a poor communist lives.

More often than not they'll be invited into a hut
provided a humble, heartfelt meal.
Sometimes by a widowed one-armed matriarch.

Today, the blood road is being devoured by jungle.
Natives still slave over rice paddies.
Just like they have for a thousand years.
And will for a thousand years more.

Some of the bomb ponds hold trapped fish
where villagers toss hopeful nets...
and who said war is good for nothing?

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