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Premium Member WHERE TIME COMES TO LOITER

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The bell above the door still jingles~
a sound like nickels spilling from a tin. 
Inside, the air smells of licorice and mildew,  
of something sweet refusing to let go. 
 
Dusty glass licorice jars sit on the shelf.
A single ceiling bulb flickers 
over penny candies wrapped in wax.  

Wooden floorboards groan underfoot,  
remembering when kids reached for treats on the top shelf
 
A rotary phone rests on the counter, black and patient,  
its coiled cord a noose for yesterday’s conversations.  

Behind the counter, Mrs. Nicholson stalworth stands;
she’d grown up in our town, 
knew everyone and just about everything
about everyone. 

She also knew where everything lived~  
the peppermints, the lye soap, the brittle  
catalogues from 1947 curling at the edges. 
 
She moved slowly, dust rising in her wake,  
a pioneer woman who remembered 
world wars, the Great Depression, and
when bread cost a dime.  

Behind the register, her apron now hangs empty,  
still smelling of peppermint and camphor.  

I pause.
This is where time comes to loiter.

Premium Member I Loiter Aimless

I LOITER AIMLESS

       In spree I like to loiter lone aimless
       making way through thorny bush and wild weeds
       where creeper secretes peculiar fluids.
      Feral flowers flowing fragrance peerless.
           
     Waves thrashing on solitary sea shore
     calling me to listen to music loud.
     Symphony resonates in interlude.
     Aqua opulence in gorgeous galore.
          
     Hot scorching desert or non-mowed meadow
      gives warm welcome to enjoy and wander.
     Sand dust or glass blade both are my wonders
     Glad to be followed only by shadow.
      
      Sunny, cloudy or even rainy sky
      Each disperses amazing ambient.
     Spectacular marvelous firmament.
     Dormant desires of mind dream to soar high.
            
     Humans work hard doing great and greater.
     I appreciate human emotion,
     success, progress of civilization
     but, adore Nature most: Smarter and better.

  
 08/21/19

       First Place
 ' STRAND SELECT' Contest by Brian Strand.

2022 Poetry Marathon Mile.  1
 
Contest by Mark Toney

Premium Member Loiter

Find peace
In ease


Dare see
What frees


Be well
Joy tells


Right here
Now cheers


Fit time
Space rhymes


Feel quest
Seize zest


Purge ploys
Know joy


Love lives
To give


Set sight
Feel light


Strange heart
Change starts


Be true
To you




Leon Enriquez
25 May 2016
Singapore


Premium Member Loiter

Epigram #65:  

LOITER


Raw nerves now trigger
Loiter with wonder
Feel falling slumber

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Leon Enriquez
26 May 2015
Singapore

To Loiter

The sign said not to loiter
But I’ve never understood
The assumption that a loiterer
Is up to some no good.

So I say to all the fritterers
Or lollygagging crowd – 
You should stand your ground and dally
Just as if you are allowed.

Show the world that you mean business;
You’re not plotting something crazy.
It’s American as apple pie
To slack off and be lazy.

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