Ineffectively Poems | Examples


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Still

Still. Affects Me. 
Just like paint under paint, under boarded up doors. 
The leeching doesn’t stop. 
When I was young, the paint was already crusting over. 
It was done already, no one understood. 
I know it does. 
Affect Me. 
I don’t really know the extent of it. 
Like water damage. 
Or hurting damage. 
It’s just my mind which causes new creases in my actions. 
The greasy, bristly Me. 
It was done. 
I turned 21 and the boarded up doors started creaking. 
All the bad things in me that didn’t yet make sense. 
It’s all about a diagnosis. 
It was just me growing up. 
In the quietness which no one tried to understand. 
Then they painted over that again. 
Splashed paint around ineffectively. 
It should make sense!
What Still Affects Me?!?
They say I’m as cured as I’ll ever be. 
The diagnosis…
Leeches through. 
Is as thorough as…
Paint splattered ineffectively. 
Which somehow Still Affects Me.

Watching You Unhinge

You know not about fear
       when in the spotlight of 
your rage
       snarled in distorted
ugly

your hatred 
       twisting
       my unguarded spine
stunting small bones
   blustering
        bluffing
concealing weakness
       too plain to miss
as
      you pound down 
walls
      and
      hammer
ineffectively on
      my resolve
to
leave you
to
  your
      own
creation

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