Halt Who Goes There Poems | Examples


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Chad's Valley

No one 
not even you
will ever know 
beforehand 
how things will go.

Practice may make perfect 
but perfect is no guarantee 
of success.


The council sent a wrecking crew 
which is
the sort of thing that council's do
and knocked the brick wall down
because the writing that was on it 
didn't fit the image of this 
Town 
and it could have been
in
Camden
Kentish
or even Highgate Village which 
is not technically a town but it
has lots of walls

Walls remind me of ghetto's
no go's
and,
'Halt who goes there?'

But it's just word association 
like 
council aberration 
normal situation
and who pays reparations 
to 
the future generations 
when we've used the whole 
world up or washed it all
away?

Take the Butterfly

TAKE THE BUTTERFLY

Take the butterfly is what Mark likes to call a surrealist word painting
---

“Halt, who goes there?” 
I said to myself out loud, and then I answered me in a soft loud slow dulcet tone type
style of voice and said.

“Who goes were?” 

I surprised myself, as I was sure that I was the only one there.

“Do you want to ride my bike?
  And 
“Have you ever tried treading grapes while juggling?”

So surprised was I that I made my mind up there and then Never to buy those knobbly bits
That taste of flat square circles ever again.

Why does my left hand keep coming up and smacking me in the gob?
  Still it’s dark outside and that’s the best place for the night to be.

So I sat very still while trying to balance on a moonbeam, and asked everyone I passed,
why are their feet going in opposite directions to themselves?

  And why is my head on your body?

Wow what a night, still its early days but I think I have the answer,
Take the butterfly.


Take the Butterfly
A surrealist word painting Original work 1991

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