Astrodome Poems | Examples


List of Member Poems

How Does the Soul Enter Heaven

When my time on earth is done I will turn to shards of light 
like the sun that sparkles bright at the edge of night,  
I will leave this place and fly like an eagle out of sight; 

When the hourglass of life has poured out every grain 
I'll depart like fading grass despite the falling rain;  
for the existence of a life span is just a tiny stain;  

When my Father calls me home to that golden astrodome 
my immortal soul will praise Him as I say goodbye to Rome.  
I will join the angel's den and never be alone 

When my time on earth is done I will soar inside blue skies  
to the gully of God's  wonder where the eagles never die 
by the couloir of my heart, in the canyon of my soul's surmise.  

January 31, 2023 

Example for my contest :)

Looking for the formal definition, structure, and history of this poetry form? Visit the Poetry Dictionary entry below. Then return to explore how PoetrySoup members bring the form to life through their own poems.

Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace