Admonishingly Poems | Examples


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The Wood Shop

I went inside my dad's dusty wood shop where 
he worked. I saw crystal silk strands with dried 
up insects hanging upside down adorning every 
corner. Warp pine boards were leaning against a work
bench waited patiently.

A rusty table-saw seem to look at me 
admonishingly. Cockroaches scurry around 
like dry leaves, while a field mouse with
black glass-like eyes dashed away disappearing 
under a cabinet.

On a dusty wooden table with rusty nails and 
screws, I see an unfinished pine step stool.
A crude drawing on yellow parched paper laid
next to a half finished project titled, 
'For my granson'.

Reading the misspelled word though watering
stinging eyes, I remembered the many times I
failed to heed his requests to join him in his shop.
I found a broom and began to sweep my guilt
away.  I called my son to help, "I'm busy" Was
his reply.

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