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Details | Haiku |

Haikus About God: II

Invisible chap
Bearded egomaniac
Probably not real

Copyright © Dan Keir | Year Posted 2013


Details | Rhyme |

God's Purpose of the Rainbow


There’s many people who claim they’ve nothing to “hide!”
They tend to use the rainbow
 as a source of their “pride.”

But if you read in the book of Genesis, it is revealing.
God’s purpose of the rainbow had a different meaning!

The rainbow was there when much
 of mankind disappeared!
There was a promise of God that was so very clear.

He promised to never again destroy man with a flood.
This was his promise...  An extension of his love!

It was never intended as his approval for perversion!
Mankind still needs a Jesus filled holy conversion!

The colors of the rainbow can’t wash away sin’s dark stain!
This can only happen by the
 power of Jesus’ name!

The colors are beautiful…  But man’s heart is filled with deceit!
Without the soul cleansing power of Jesus… 
 We’re never complete!

No court decision can give the freedom that many desire!
Only the power of the cross can
 change you this very hour!

The only way to find equality with God, is through the cross!
Without his words of truth…
We are forever LOST!

Look past the colors of the rainbow!  Seek the power of the blood!
Then you too, can be changed from
 God’s power from above!

By Jim Pemberton   

Copyright © Jim Pemberton | Year Posted 2013

Details | Rhyme |

America Is Being DESTROYED From Within

 

As sin and perversion often become integrated… So many lives and families are being “disintegrated.” Many are being driven by sin’s temptation force… It’s no wonder much of this country is way “off course.” The morality and values that once made a great nation. Are evaporating…. Leading to a “spiritual separation.” Love, honor, and respect of God… Is often a “thing of the past.” Anything of God seems to be disappearing FAST! God is our only hope! And him alone! Only he can bring healing to our broken homes! He’s the answer to this wounded nation, that bleeds! It’s only God that can meet all of our needs! He’s our provider… The great: “I am!” Won’t you reach out to him? And give him your hand? Why not give him a chance? And allow him in? A brand new life for you… Is waiting to begin! May we allow God’s holiness and love to reach down into our hearts… Asking; “Lord please forgive our sins!” Is a good place to start! By Jim Pemberton

Copyright © Jim Pemberton | Year Posted 2013


Details | Rhyme |

Draw A Better Picture

Is it her calling?
I was just drawling
pictures of my feelings.

All these killers and retards 
we should be healing,
Insted we are keeping 
them from the world.

Tis it was the greatest story ever told
until our memories were sold.

Help us, lord
ashes to ashes 
and dust to dust
are the words.

Listen,
I'm speaking to the nation
about a lost generation,
built off of freedom and innovation,
that was sweeping the nation
during the emancipation proclamation.



Copyright © Blake Holland | Year Posted 2016

Details | Rhyme |

In God We Trust

A spirit of violence is creeping in this country to invade.
In our large cities citizens are becoming afraid.
Race related shootings are more frequent,
Stirring up hate and feelings of discontent.

We have to worry about terrorists, and loners acting in rage.
It is a sign of the end times in this day and age.
Our national motto is "In God We Trust."
We need to put God back in America, an absolute must.







Written 9/26/16
"What is Society" contest
Sponsor: Ironic Zink
Awarded 7th Place

Copyright © Brenda McGrath | Year Posted 2016

Details | Lyric |

Rain Man

we got a lot of rain man's wearin ray bands tryin to shake hands
with baked fans it a staged plan to get carly rea pants in front of a video tape.
stumblin mumblin bumblin fools trying to get paid
To say f this chick and f that one
whatever absurd word that flows right off of this tongue
got a dirty mouth, here is some orbitz gum
im sweatin bullets and i cant even afford a gun
but its so free if i want to abort my son then take his lungs
so i can be one hundred and forty one
and be here to see the thwarting of the sun

mr. obama who've worn out your welcome
But what do I know? I'm this republicun
who thinks all  girls and boys should become
either a monk or nun and never cum
and pay for all of our condoms and pregnancy prescriptions
Or am I christian who cant have fun
because I know hun its wrong to drink coke and rums
till i am drunk and wait for the ring to get buns
then go condemn kids with weed and pokemon

And its sad to think this what our kids believe
cause this what they preach on the MTV
and  their  heart beat beats to each tweet and re-tweet
till a pick leaks online then they move on to vines
whatever better trend setter that stimulates the mind

Copyright © Mike Conway | Year Posted 2013

Details | Prose Poetry |

Thanksliving 2014

THANKSLIVING 2014
"Let us be thankful" Hebrews 12:28

Times are tough this year,
Seems we should cry.
Many lost their jobs,
Please Lord, tell me why.

The pain will not go away,
Doctors tried for months.
What can we do now,
We don't have many wants.

Foreigners flood our land,
The the few jobs that remain.
Want everything for free,
Bring us peace again.

Our leaders do not care,
Destroy our given rights.
Christians persecuted everywhere,
We are to weak for fights.

Sodom and Gomorrah,
The ancient days of Rome.
Lifestyles that destroyed these nations,
Now legal in our home.

One Nation Under God,
You gave this land to be.
Those elected do not believe in you,
We live in misery.

Help us find our way,
Top return to One God.
Then we will have Thanks-living,
Where your faithful ones once trod.

RAYMOND V. MORGAN

Copyright © Raymond Morgan | Year Posted 2014

Details | Prose |

A Modern Fascist Truth

If you think, we're safe in U.K. beds,
You couldn't be more wrong.
We've been an island race for 1000s of years,
Where's our fighting British gone? 
When did we stop marching? 
What's keeping us at home?
What stopped patriotic chanting?
Britain First can't be on their own.
If you want the UK, A Muslim state,
Our blood is on your hands.
Pretend like you didn't read this,
Bury your head back in the sands.
Sand which our ancestors died for, 
They gave their lives to protect.
Safeguarding us and the rest of the world 
from the last bunch lunatics, 
They murdered those dissimilar,
From their messed up version of man
Previously known as nazis...
The new threat is called ISLAM.

Copyright © Michael Kirk | Year Posted 2014

Details | Free verse |

green waves

An ancient story 
from the emerald isle 
the jewel of every 
Irish heart treasured 
unwrapping it's beauty 
waves of green 
descent a 
world over 
spilling onto 
the streets 
like a tidal wave 

Core of our ancestors 
plucking them straight 
from the ground 
a little scarce 
this year 
gathering myself 
a right 
glorious bunch 

Taking them home 
a feeling 
of great pride 
as I wash them clean 
plucking dead 
ones out 
putting the cleaned shamrocks 
in a glass 
as taught down 
from my guardian parents 

Come our saints day 
I will have a massive 
great bunch 
knowing i could 
sell a big chunk 
to a few friend smiling 
with spare ones 
left at home 
depending on 
the demand 
laughing out loud 

With reverence 
to our great 
Saint Patrick 
on our day 
of green 
who banished 
the serpents 
from our soil 

His story 
is truly magical 
amongst the Irish 
sparkling shamrocks 
the blessed trinity 
a tale of lore 
he appeared 
in Tir Na Og 
meaning in English 
land of forever young 

Our true Irish flag 
is the harp and shamrock 
dating back to the fianna 
warriors of a king 
he is Paddy 
and i am one 
very proud patron 



On this wave 
of green rises 
for our great Saint 
raising my glass 
three cheers 
drowning Paddies shamrock 
in good style 
hail glorious 
Saint Patrick

Copyright © liam mcdaid | Year Posted 2014

Details | Lyric |

If We Try To Ask Why

If We Try To Ask Why

It was another plain morning in the mundane business belt
until we felt the day stay still, and we knelt to pray at will.
In the decade since our engrained tranquility was strained,
our prayers have waned, and cooperation was not sustained.
As proof time is trained to be aloof to tears of our grieving,
the babies born to widows, our high schools are now receiving.
And in history books, I fear a new chapter must appear …
Alongside its heavy content, the sheen on serene sheets shall screen
the extent of torment The Event means to they who lament …
Until the day they die, for some, when the autumn sun is high
in the September sky, the past and present run as one:
The scene, never done, repeats; people run; the crowd retreats …
And, where the cloud of carnage meets startled city streets,
the ash painting the panorama underpins
our divine Manhattan skyline mourning her twins …
If we try to ask why, theologians will explain,
when God grants free will, evil may reign, despite its pain.
My theory, one of many but as good as any,
is that the gist of why a sadist’s bloodlust exists
isn’t to be endeared to God, but feared like God.
Some philosophers pry, “Why was the September sky
a nearly perfect hue of select, pastel blue?”
The poets sigh, “… because on this date the land stayed dry
when the cascade of nearby angels refused to cry;
they came to fixate upon the souls they had to elevate,
and through the demure azure, the dead felt peacefully lead …”
If we heed our ancestors’ lead, never letting faith recede,
the wealth of our prayers might impede the stealth of the slayers,
but if we try to ask why, our first task may be to find
ourselves resigned to God sometimes being disinclined
to thwart an evil mastermind within humankind.

Copyright © Elizabeth Wyler | Year Posted 2016

Details | Prose Poetry |

That Frightful Day

That Frightful Day

It was Tuesday, 
The world was told.
That terror filled the skies,
With murder cold and bold.

Americans are secure,
Our world is safe we said.
We work in total comfort,
Rest securely in our bed.

September is a lovely month,
Along the Eastern shores.
Turning leaves and autumn breeze,
Shouting peace, forevermore.

The eleventh day began the same,
With warm winds and shining sun.
Our dreams were real, our hopes were high,
It was the year double o' one.

What were those planes doing in the town,
Why were they flying so low?
The world's twin towers would soon come down,
All would surely know.

New York will never be the same,
Nor will the U S A.
People now stand hand in hand,
Because of that frightful day.

Americans are now united,
Our new-found faith will stay.
You and I will conquer,
If we take the time to pray.

God gave His Son to guide us,
With a message of Peace and Joy.
Love and understanding,
If His glory we employ.

RAYMOND V. MORGAN

Copyright © Raymond Morgan | Year Posted 2014

Details | Rhyme |

American Traitor

To manipulate laws to disqualify voters,
Vote multiple times, or give dead living voice,
These are acts of a traitor! Man’s born with a choice.
Should political virtue be building consensus,
To hate when you don't win a kind of psychosis,
You lose, what's the message for you, your promoters?

Please don't tell me the other side's screwing the country,
Election (if fair), this conclusion's in doubt,
And your loss by itself is no reason to pout,
Wouldn't Patriot work harder then at convincing,
Reject still those lies that the devil's financing?
The truth of this logic seems quite elementary.

How could Patriot's heart put the screws to his brothers?
It’s serving your country to want level field!
Only traitors would legislate vantage concealed?
Equal pay might help women, whose futures you’re planning,
And your daughters too! Should they major in tanning?
To give them a choice, shouldn’t ‘chance’ be your druthers?

But your radical base hates both woman and daughter,
A woman empowered means man’s power’s less!
Base’s depth of depravity no one can guess!
They’re abusers and liars who seek own advantage,
All victory means is a winning percentage,
‘Vile manhood’ that grows with each victim they slaughter.

Current Bible translations abuse still the fair sex,
In Genesis 3:16 truth’s lost in Greek, (1)
Gender bias apparent to humble who seek,
It’s the serpent that’s cursed but NOT Adam and Eve when
God punished, not cursed (as sin’s recognized price in
Expulsion from garden, survival’s new simplex).

While the rich hide their earnings, the poor give all access,
Poor tithe to their God and pay Caesar what’s owed,
Income taxed, property, even gifts fate bestowed,
Infrastructural needs (such as highways and schooling),
With ‘next generation’ and ‘present needs’ dueling,
Don’t bother the wealthy; it’s clear no one cares less.

So “American Traitor,” ride high on your stick horse,
Though lower than pond scum (that’s why you’ve no view!)
Aren’t you lucky your kids can’t see albatross you?
Just a carnival barker, a “wanna be” watch FOB,
Our POTUS, a hair ball stray cat left (on its job),
Real knowledge and smarts aren’t so easy to outsource.


Brian Johnston
August 14, 2017

Poet’s Notes:
(1) No Bible verse can be safely extracted and put on a pedestal by itself. All scripture is contextual and must be understood together with the Bible as a whole if we are to hope for any reasonable understanding. Accordingly, Genesis 3:14-24 must be subject to the same scrutiny. The serpent is cursed, but the Bible does not say that God "cursed" either Eve or Adam. Rather in the case of Adam, it is the “ground” that he must farm now for his food that is cursed. It now has “thorns and thistles” to make food production even harder. Eve will now experience “increased” labor in childbirth. So labor pain was “always part of God’s creation” for some sensation is required when a child is born. But after the “fall” the pain increased. However, verse 3:16 seems to go even further and to suggest the man is now to be Eve’s master.

Such an interpretation, however, conflicts with Genesis 1:27 which says “God created human beings in his own image; in the image of God he created them; male and female he created them.” In this verse, God says that man and woman are equals and suggests the order of their creation does not give a man any real status.

A new understanding of verse 3:16 tells us that in the original language it is impossible to say for sure if the word “he” should be translated as “he” or as “it!” If the correct choice is “it," then the verse does not imply that “man is to be woman’s master” at all. Instead, it suggests that a better interpretation is “Your desire shall be for your husband and “it” (your desire?) shall be your master.” Because a woman is made vulnerable by the birth of a child, she wants a helpmate (or a husband) to be with her. It is this “desire” will now be her “master” and have a large influence on how she views the world. The “Spirit” I believe is telling us that this is the correct interpretation of this verse and that man is not and has never been woman’s master!

Copyright © Brian Johnston | Year Posted 2017