Zorro Swings

Zorro swings and Zorro falls, sadly landed on someones balls excommunicated from the mall, for gross protracted screaming. Zorro on the crutch of one, slapped down by a redneck nun, pivoted crutch to plonking run, so bad he must be dreaming? Springing for his horse so black, drop kicked his oolies slack, glad it wasn't a donkey Jack, the Z man enterprising. Don Johnson 6-aug-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/7/2011 4:45:00 PM
this cracked me up as I tried to visualize this hero turned sissy .. wow..a downgrade luv.. is Zorro's rep soiled? yet a dynamic piece of poetry my friend.. all I need now is a pepsi and a smile.. I don't drink coke..so had to change the slogan..luv.
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Date: 8/6/2011 10:38:00 PM
Clever...I grew up with Zorro and this sends a great message on the reigns of the classic Zorro. At least you kept the horse still great. Loved it mate!
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Date: 8/6/2011 9:19:00 PM
You sure come up with fun scenarios for your poems,Don. Now a zorro in the all. Loved the balls line!!
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Date: 8/6/2011 8:41:00 PM
You have a crazy sense of humor to come up with this. It was all fun and I enjoyed.
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Date: 8/6/2011 10:23:00 AM
Man oh man.. gotta love them redneck nuns! Dig the humor, Don Johnson.
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