Bukang Liwayway Poet Haiku

Zombies In the Night

zombies stumbling in the night
                                                   walk together side by side
                                                          looking for human

                                                 bloody Mary's a scary in sight
                                          howling and gnashing the line breaker
                                                 they seem strong and hungry

                                                       So strong to stop them
                                                 hide the dog a little help is good
                                                         every now and then



4th Place Winner
For Tracie's Spooky Ku" contest
October 12, 2012

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Poet Destroyer A November 1, 2012 at 4:13 PM Maria, congratulations in Tracie's fun "~Spooky Ku'~ contest. wishing you the best always :-) PD

Audrey Haick October 30, 2012 at 2:42 PM Congrats on your fabulous win, Maria! ..."zombies stumbling in the night..." potent imagery! Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2012 at 1:56 PM Congratulations for your scary Ku win, Maria. Always nice to see your poems at Soup.

Len Gasun October 30, 2012 at 8:12 AM My big congratulations with big hugs on your win my dear friend, Mary! love, LG

Carol Sunshine Brown October 30, 2012 at 6:32 AM Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Maria. Love, Carol

Joseph May October 30, 2012 at 5:55 AM congrats on your win Maria

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 30, 2012 at 2:29 AM Congratulations on your spooky ku win Maria xx

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2012 at 2:24 AM Congratulations with your spooky Halloween Haiku poems! - Hoping for a scary Halloween night - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Booooo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 30, 2012 at 12:25 AM CONGRATS MARIA ON A WONDERFUL SPOOKY KU WRITE AND WIN FILLED WITH HALLOWEEN FLAVOR LUV ..

Len Gasun October 17, 2012 at 7:24 PM hmmnnnn.... great write indeed my dear friend, Mary! Good luck and best wishes always! love/hugs:)Norie

Kash Poet October 16, 2012 at 1:38 AM Very spooky indeed Maria.Enjoyed your haiku.Best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A October 15, 2012 at 8:12 PM Maria, wow..i'm staying zombie free this Halloween ..lol... Your haiku have a spiked up image... scary and all..xox~pd

Richard Palmer October 14, 2012 at 8:45 PM lol scary write Maria,love it,check out my Halloween Night

Terry O'Leary October 12, 2012 at 5:35 PM I prefer zombies in the day, so I can see them better... Terry (nice haiku)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 12, 2012 at 10:07 AM TERRIFIC MARIA .. GREAT LINES OF VISUAL IMAGERY ON SPOOKY ZOMBIES LUV .. HALLOWEEN FUN .. LUV BLOODY MARY ..

David Williams October 12, 2012 at 7:04 AM Maria good scary tale...David

Anne-Lise Andresen October 12, 2012 at 6:49 AM I lock my door and stay home Maria ..... lol. - Love it - well done!! Have a beautiful day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun October 12, 2012 at 1:57 AM I found this hilarious Mary! Excellent write! I figured out this is for the contest. Well, good luck and best wishes my friend. I'm just stopping by for a while. My screen is shaking and so annoying. i think there's virus, lol. Good luck always! love,LG

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2012 at 12:44 AM this one is funny. Love your last line, Maria.