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Zombies In the Night

zombies stumbling in the night
                                                   walk together side by side
                                                          looking for human

                                                 bloody Mary's a scary in sight
                                          howling and gnashing the line breaker
                                                 they seem strong and hungry

                                                       So strong to stop them
                                                 hide the dog a little help is good
                                                         every now and then



4th Place Winner
For Tracie's Spooky Ku" contest
October 12, 2012

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/1/2012 4:13:00 PM

Maria, congratulations in Tracie's fun "~Spooky Ku'~ contest. wishing you the best always :-) PD

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/30/2012 2:42:00 PM

Congrats on your fabulous win, Maria! ..."zombies stumbling in the night..." potent imagery! Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2012 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations for your scary Ku win, Maria. Always nice to see your poems at Soup.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/30/2012 8:12:00 AM

My big congratulations with big hugs on your win my dear friend, Mary! love, LG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/30/2012 6:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Maria. Love, Carol

Joseph May

Date: 10/30/2012 5:55:00 AM

congrats on your win Maria

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/30/2012 2:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your spooky ku win Maria xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2012 2:24:00 AM

Congratulations with your spooky Halloween Haiku poems! - Hoping for a scary Halloween night - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Booooo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/30/2012 12:25:00 AM

CONGRATS MARIA ON A WONDERFUL SPOOKY KU WRITE AND WIN FILLED WITH HALLOWEEN FLAVOR LUV ..

Len Gasun

Date: 10/17/2012 7:24:00 PM

hmmnnnn.... great write indeed my dear friend, Mary! Good luck and best wishes always! love/hugs:)Norie

Kash Poet

Date: 10/16/2012 1:38:00 AM

Very spooky indeed Maria.Enjoyed your haiku.Best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/15/2012 8:12:00 PM

Maria, wow..i'm staying zombie free this Halloween ..lol... Your haiku have a spiked up image... scary and all..xox~pd

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/14/2012 8:45:00 PM

lol scary write Maria,love it,check out my Halloween Night

Terry O'Leary

Date: 10/12/2012 5:35:00 PM

I prefer zombies in the day, so I can see them better... Terry (nice haiku)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/12/2012 10:07:00 AM

TERRIFIC MARIA .. GREAT LINES OF VISUAL IMAGERY ON SPOOKY ZOMBIES LUV .. HALLOWEEN FUN .. LUV BLOODY MARY ..

David Williams

Date: 10/12/2012 7:04:00 AM

Maria good scary tale...David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2012 6:49:00 AM

I lock my door and stay home Maria ..... lol. - Love it - well done!! Have a beautiful day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/12/2012 1:57:00 AM

I found this hilarious Mary! Excellent write! I figured out this is for the contest. Well, good luck and best wishes my friend. I'm just stopping by for a while. My screen is shaking and so annoying. i think there's virus, lol. Good luck always! love,LG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2012 12:44:00 AM

this one is funny. Love your last line, Maria.